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11-08-2009 04:57 PM
paulgoatallen wrote:
Ken:
Thanks for stopping back and enlightening us! I completely missed the Charles not being named Charles bit! Must go back and reread!
And, yes, I did catch the Antiphon/Canticle reference. Very cool.
Antiphon (def) – A short liturgical text chanted or sung responsively preceding or following a psalm, psalm verse, or canticle.
I'll email you in a few days – or at week's end – with a bunch of wrap-up questions. Hopefully you'll have to to answer them for us! Thanks again, Ken and congrats on a truly classic saga! we love it!
Paul
You've got to be kidding Paul! Wrapping up this discussion by the end of the week! Have you seen the list of questions and observations Melissa has posted? It will probably take most of this week to get through those. And I haven't even started to warm up yet! In fact I'm not even sure where to begin because I want to be a bit systematic in presenting my points and there are so many points and directions in this Wymer's Maze!
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11-08-2009 05:25 PM - edited 11-08-2009 05:28 PM
Melhay wrote:Okay all... I am going to start posting some ideas and questions here that I have for through the end of the book. This ending was great! You really did pick a great stopping point Paul. It just ran from chapter 18 till the end.
I am going to start with Neb. I do have to say I love Neb and Isaak and the metal men. There seemed to not be much of them here in this book. They are so important to what is happening by you are not seeing much to them. I want more of Neb and this with the metal men and Isaak, I love the mystery behind them - I guess this mystery is partly why I want more of them. Great job with that Ken!
***SPOILERS***
Okay what is the story with the Waste Lands? Is there that much magick out there?
Neb is changing
Pg 268 - a strength was coming from him, his mind focused clearer & calm, his body felt like a lute coming into tune. He slept dreamless and deep.
Pg 375 – the birds don’t hold their magicks in the Wastes.
Pg 295 – the Song in the Wastes makes Neb laugh & cry. Why? How? Magicked? This song even makes the Metal man Charles laugh and cry.
It just seems strange to me about the Churned Wastes having this affect on people
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I agree, I think there must be something in the Waste Lands that can affect people and even machines. This is where Neb is to find his destiny. And there does seem to be some sort a "barrier" maybe a magic shield of some kind that blocks out Neb's dreams and Winters cannot reach him anymore. Don't forget this was also a restricted area. The Keeper's Gate was ment to keep people out and you needed special permission to enter. Maybe because the "magic" here affects people and changes them. And there is also the restriction imposed by Charles-the-machine at D'Anjite's Bridge, the only way from the overland route into The Churning Waste. But there is also access to this area from the south sea, especially from the Ghosting Crests and I will have lots to say on this later. I gather early on the original Marchers and Gypsies migrated from here to the eastern lands. We don't know a lot about why yet or how they got there. We are not even sure if this was a Wymer or Y'Zir domain (a lot on that later!).The song is obviously very important, especially toward the end. But it is also sung (maybe heard) by the Gypsy army and also by Rudolfo who even knows the words. Ken keeps pounding the significance of this song into us, especially toward the end. And his last post is a big hint:---------------------------------------Ken wrote:By the way, did anyone else pick up on the notion that an antiphon is a response to a canticle?-------------------------------------------------I believe Ken is indicating the plot direction and I have some big ideas on that one. But I need to build my case first. Don't forget this is also Petronus' destination..
Even when Renard started running out here with Neb and the Scouts following he started laughing funny as well. And Neb said he could feel something.
I think it is more than the Crescent that he finds out here. I think there is a lot more out here.
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11-08-2009 05:31 PM
Nadine wrote:
paulgoatallen wrote:
Ken:
Thanks for stopping back and enlightening us! I completely missed the Charles not being named Charles bit! Must go back and reread!
And, yes, I did catch the Antiphon/Canticle reference. Very cool.
Antiphon (def) – A short liturgical text chanted or sung responsively preceding or following a psalm, psalm verse, or canticle.
I'll email you in a few days – or at week's end – with a bunch of wrap-up questions. Hopefully you'll have to to answer them for us! Thanks again, Ken and congrats on a truly classic saga! we love it!
Paul
You've got to be kidding Paul! Wrapping up this discussion by the end of the week! Have you seen the list of questions and observations Melissa has posted? It will probably take most of this week to get through those. And I haven't even started to warm up yet! In fact I'm not even sure where to begin because I want to be a bit systematic in presenting my points and there are so many points and directions in this Wymer's Maze!
Ha! Yeah, I know, Nadine! I just didn't want to scare Ken off by saying, "we'll send you a bunch of questions later this week, then next week, and the week after that..."!
I'd love to get more tidbits from Ken – I think the more we figure out now, the more we'll want to get our hands on Antiphon...
You know, THIS is what epic SF/fantasy is all about, in my opinion. We've got an incredibly intricate storyline with so many plotlines and mysteries.... We also have a series with some profoundly "deep" themes – what it means to be "human," the potential annihilation of the race, redemption, hope, etc. And it make it all just a masterwork, it's a wildly entertaining story with brilliantly realized characters, amazing world-building and backstory, symbolism and allegory....
I LOVE THESE NOVELS!!!
Paul
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11-08-2009 05:34 PM
Hi Ken!
Glad to see you stopping by.
I remember reading that the metal Charles is not named Charles & he was scripted by Charles (the man) but I didn't know what to call him. Did we really ever get a name for him? I can't remember that... so I just kept calling hime the metal Charles so we could specify him. If you have a name for him that would be great.
Thanks again for your time and great information on the books.
"There are no honorable causes. There is no good or evil. Evil is only what we call those who oppose us." From Nyphron Rising, By Michael J. Sullivan
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11-08-2009 05:36 PM
Nadine wrote:
I believe Ken is indicating the plot direction and I have some big ideas on that one. But I need to build my case first. Don't forget this is also Petronus' destination.
.
Even when Renard started running out here with Neb and the Scouts following he started laughing funny as well. And Neb said he could feel something.
I think it is more than the Crescent that he finds out here. I think there is a lot more out here.
Nadine:
Wow. You're right (I think).And if that IS the case, then I would guess that Antiphon would be hugely powered by Neb's unfolding storyline.... And Charles has to be significant or else Ken wouldn't have mentioned him (or it).... Hmmm.....
Paul
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11-08-2009 05:37 PM
Nadine wrote:
paulgoatallen wrote:
Ken:
Thanks for stopping back and enlightening us! I completely missed the Charles not being named Charles bit! Must go back and reread!
And, yes, I did catch the Antiphon/Canticle reference. Very cool.
Antiphon (def) – A short liturgical text chanted or sung responsively preceding or following a psalm, psalm verse, or canticle.
I'll email you in a few days – or at week's end – with a bunch of wrap-up questions. Hopefully you'll have to to answer them for us! Thanks again, Ken and congrats on a truly classic saga! we love it!
Paul
You've got to be kidding Paul! Wrapping up this discussion by the end of the week! Have you seen the list of questions and observations Melissa has posted? It will probably take most of this week to get through those. And I haven't even started to warm up yet! In fact I'm not even sure where to begin because I want to be a bit systematic in presenting my points and there are so many points and directions in this Wymer's Maze!
*lol* Hey Nadine, I didn't know where to start with all my ideas either. I thought if I just threw some out there with questions and ideas that would start the discussion ball rolling and we could hit on the many other points I wanted to talk about.
There is just so much to this book and to the ending. GREAT STUFF!!
"There are no honorable causes. There is no good or evil. Evil is only what we call those who oppose us." From Nyphron Rising, By Michael J. Sullivan
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11-08-2009 05:56 PM
paulgoatallen wrote:
Nadine wrote:I believe Ken is indicating the plot direction and I have some big ideas on that one. But I need to build my case first. Don't forget this is also Petronus' destination.
.
Even when Renard started running out here with Neb and the Scouts following he started laughing funny as well. And Neb said he could feel something.
I think it is more than the Crescent that he finds out here. I think there is a lot more out here.
Nadine:
Wow. You're right (I think).And if that IS the case, then I would guess that Antiphon would be hugely powered by Neb's unfolding storyline.... And Charles has to be significant or else Ken wouldn't have mentioned him (or it).... Hmmm.....
Paul
Ken wrote:
By the way, did anyone else pick up on the notion that an antiphon is a response to a canticle?
_____________________________
Don't forget all, The metal man told Neb that the song required an answer. This was a big thing for Neb when he was trying to figure out the cipher. He kept thinking this. And even after he found the crescent he thought the same thing,
pg 372:
...Tinny and far away, the song played out from it and he lifted it, holding it against the backdrop of the dim light from above. The song grew louder, and beneath it, Neb heard the croaking of frogs and the distant burbling of a brook.
Beneath his fingers, he felt the line of continents and mountains upon the crescent-shaped object. He held it to his ear and felt the solid comfort of how it fit there.
It requires a response.
Then I also think this is important also, on the crescent. Just a little further down the page.
He knew what he would see, but he did not know how he knew it. Still, holding it up against the moon, he saw the sliver for what it was and compared the rough map of its surface to the blue-green orb that hung in the night sky behind it.
They matched. It was the moon.
Starlight and moonlight swarled in its silver surface, and it was a metal that he'd seen before. The same strange and ancient steel that formed the Firstfall axe of Winters's office. Bringing it down, he rested the silver crescent between his shoulder and the side of his head, cradling it against himself so that his ear was pressed up to it.
This is the source of the dream. Hidden within that "Canticle to the Fallen Moon" lay Neb's destiny, and he welcomed it.
This crescent is a map of the moon. But it also matches the metal of Winters's axe. Could this axe of Winters be part of her dreaming ability? Should this crescent be matched up with the axe?
The song Canticle of the Fallen Moon is a big clue to what ever is going to happen. I was hoping we would get the words to the song when Rudolfo started to sing. I think Rudolfos clues of what the song is about is a big thing as well. I will have to search those out of my notes after dinner here to add them to our list.
"There are no honorable causes. There is no good or evil. Evil is only what we call those who oppose us." From Nyphron Rising, By Michael J. Sullivan
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11-08-2009 06:45 PM
paulgoatallen wrote:
Nadine wrote:
You've got to be kidding Paul! Wrapping up this discussion by the end of the week! Have you seen the list of questions and observations Melissa has posted? It will probably take most of this week to get through those. And I haven't even started to warm up yet! In fact I'm not even sure where to begin because I want to be a bit systematic in presenting my points and there are so many points and directions in this Wymer's Maze!
Ha! Yeah, I know, Nadine! I just didn't want to scare Ken off by saying, "we'll send you a bunch of questions later this week, then next week, and the week after that..."!
I'd love to get more tidbits from Ken – I think the more we figure out now, the more we'll want to get our hands on Antiphon...
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Ok We will break him in gently! He has to know we are in for the duration. I was even thinking of starting an Antiphon thread so I could put all my upcoming speculations in one place. Then I would be ready to go when we get our ARCs
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You know, THIS is what epic SF/fantasy is all about, in my opinion. We've got an incredibly intricate storyline with so many plotlines and mysteries.... We also have a series with some profoundly "deep" themes – what it means to be "human," the potential annihilation of the race, redemption, hope, etc. And it make it all just a masterwork, it's a wildly entertaining story with brilliantly realized characters, amazing world-building and backstory, symbolism and allegory....
I LOVE THESE NOVELS!!!
Paul
This is perfect series for this level of discussion. It is full of clues and changes in direction, the books are coming out at reasonable time period, there is a finite number so we know there is going to be a resolution and ending in the near future, AND no one knows the ending yet or how we get there -- maybe not even Ken. ![]()
I mentioned this in Lamentation and I will again here, it is what Harry Potter was as "guessing" book but I think better. Unfortunately it doesn't have the publicity. What Ken has to do is offend some outspoken group so they can condemn it. Best way to boost sales. ![]()
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11-08-2009 06:49 PM
Melhay wrote:Hi Ken!
Glad to see you stopping by.
I remember reading that the metal Charles is not named Charles & he was scripted by Charles (the man) but I didn't know what to call him. Did we really ever get a name for him? I can't remember that... so I just kept calling hime the metal Charles so we could specify him. If you have a name for him that would be great.
Thanks again for your time and great information on the books.
Hmmm. Melissa. You just jolted my memory. Isaak was mechoservitor #3. Most do not have names -- in fact I think Isaak is unique. Now Charles (machine) seems to be the same model as Isaak (he appeared in Lamentation to be the only one of his type surviving). Maybe Charles (machine) is mechoservitor # 2. I think mechoservitor #1 might be "The Watcher."
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11-08-2009 07:00 PM
paulgoatallen wrote:
Nadine wrote:I believe Ken is indicating the plot direction and I have some big ideas on that one. But I need to build my case first. Don't forget this is also Petronus' destination.
.
Even when Renard started running out here with Neb and the Scouts following he started laughing funny as well. And Neb said he could feel something.
I think it is more than the Crescent that he finds out here. I think there is a lot more out here.
Nadine:
Wow. You're right (I think).And if that IS the case, then I would guess that Antiphon would be hugely powered by Neb's unfolding storyline.... And Charles has to be significant or else Ken wouldn't have mentioned him (or it).... Hmmm.....
Paul
I agree, Paul. We didn't have a lot of Isaak, Neb, or Charles (both) in Canticle except for either introducing them or redirecting them. They are being set up for the next book. A lot of ground work was done in Canticle to set the foundation for the next book and probably the rest of the series. We will see the development of all of this in Antiphon. I think a lot of Antiphon will take place in the Waste Lands because that is where the characters (and we) have to go to find answers to a lot of questions presented in Canticle -- and there are a lot of questions and a lot of characters heading in that direction! The end of Canticle threw me (and probably some others) into a spin and in a totally new direction.
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11-08-2009 07:01 PM
Nadine wrote:
Melhay wrote:Hi Ken!
Glad to see you stopping by.
I remember reading that the metal Charles is not named Charles & he was scripted by Charles (the man) but I didn't know what to call him. Did we really ever get a name for him? I can't remember that... so I just kept calling hime the metal Charles so we could specify him. If you have a name for him that would be great.
Thanks again for your time and great information on the books.
Hmmm. Melissa. You just jolted my memory. Isaak was mechoservitor #3. Most do not have names -- in fact I think Isaak is unique. Now Charles (machine) seems to be the same model as Isaak (he appeared in Lamentation to be the only one of his type surviving). Maybe Charles (machine) is mechoservitor # 2. I think mechoservitor #1 might be "The Watcher."
That is right. They don't have names and do have numbers. But I don't even think the number is even given. This metal man calls Isaak cousin. Not brother. Which sounded odd to me. I think Charles (the man) mentions that this metal man is an older version. That Isaak is able to do more in the way of scripting. This metal man was one of the first to be made that then lead to the making of Isaaks generation. Also, I think there are 10 total of this generation with the charles metal man. Didn't Charles (the man) mention that they are used for "special" projects, which we have learned is the Hidden Library.
But, here again Isaak is different because Rudolfo named him - BUT he also exhibited human emotions and feelings along with Lieing. This charles metal man is exhibiting human emotions and feelings and thoughts, particularly when he gives his scrolls to Neb and realizes that the library may be needed. How do we know, maybe he is lieing about something as well...
But since he is showing human feelings and such, would he take a name?
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11-08-2009 07:09 PM
kenscholes wrote:Hi All! It's been fun watching the speculation and then seeing as some of you hit the finish line. Sorry to have been so quiet -- the book tour, combined with World Fantasy, took it out of me. You'll be pleased to hear that Antiphon is indeed turned in, revisions and all, and I'm getting ready to sink my teeth into Requiem.
I'm very happy to answer questions but at this point, it's probably most useful if they're gathered up in one email and sent over to me. I'm happy to take a stab at them, though, at any time.
Some of you are scary-good at figuring out where I'm headed.
SPOILER ALERT:
I've seen talk about the metal Charles and am wondering if anyone picked up on the fact that he's not really named Charles, that he was merely scripted (by Charles, who was in captivity with him) to bear the message in an attempt to find and warn Petronus. Alas, the message arrived a bit late.
I may not have been clear enough there.
I'm glad you folks are enjoying the books. Again, happy to answer questions if you have any. Gather them up at the end of a week and send them along. Feel free to keep at me, too, and I'll come back and answer as needed.
I love having you folks as a part of my readership. Big thanks to Paul for having me out again. I'll keep bouncing into the room to see what's up but don't be shy. I'm easily found but starting to heat up for volume 4....
By the way, did anyone else pick up on the notion that an antiphon is a response to a canticle?
Hey Ken,
I think this is a sign of an awesome author with an epic tale to tell.
You have given us the clues, yet there are many pieces that could go in any direction. We are taking the wonderous story you have told and try to piece the pieces together along with the mystery that is still not answered yet. You have laid the many paths for us, we just have to choose one. We think he have picked the proper path but at any time we could come to a fork in the road and have to guess again. Your story can go in any direction, we are just trying to pick the most logical one in this world. Which you could always change on us.
But, Ken, if you ever need any help just drop us a line. I know I would love to help you out with any story.
Melissa
"There are no honorable causes. There is no good or evil. Evil is only what we call those who oppose us." From Nyphron Rising, By Michael J. Sullivan
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11-08-2009 07:17 PM
Melhay wrote:
paulgoatallen wrote:
Nadine wrote:I believe Ken is indicating the plot direction and I have some big ideas on that one. But I need to build my case first. Don't forget this is also Petronus' destination.
.
Even when Renard started running out here with Neb and the Scouts following he started laughing funny as well. And Neb said he could feel something.
I think it is more than the Crescent that he finds out here. I think there is a lot more out here.
Nadine:
Wow. You're right (I think).And if that IS the case, then I would guess that Antiphon would be hugely powered by Neb's unfolding storyline.... And Charles has to be significant or else Ken wouldn't have mentioned him (or it).... Hmmm.....
Paul
Ken wrote:By the way, did anyone else pick up on the notion that an antiphon is a response to a canticle?_____________________________
Don't forget all, The metal man told Neb that the song required an answer. This was a big thing for Neb when he was trying to figure out the cipher. He kept thinking this. And even after he found the crescent he thought the same thing,
pg 372:
...Tinny and far away, the song played out from it and he lifted it, holding it against the backdrop of the dim light from above. The song grew louder, and beneath it, Neb heard the croaking of frogs and the distant burbling of a brook.
Beneath his fingers, he felt the line of continents and mountains upon the crescent-shaped object. He held it to his ear and felt the solid comfort of how it fit there.
It requires a response.
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------- Nadine: Great find Melissa. Of course. Ken just keeps hitting us over the head with this. This song is really important and so is the Weeping Czar story. I think I wil have to read it again with the ending of this book in mind now.
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Then I also think this is important also, on the crescent. Just a little further down the page.
He knew what he would see, but he did not know how he knew it. Still, holding it up against the moon, he saw the sliver for what it was and compared the rough map of its surface to the blue-green orb that hung in the night sky behind it.
They matched. It was the moon.
Starlight and moonlight swarled in its silver surface, and it was a metal that he'd seen before. The same strange and ancient steel that formed the Firstfall axe of Winters's office. Bringing it down, he rested the silver crescent between his shoulder and the side of his head, cradling it against himself so that his ear was pressed up to it.
This is the source of the dream. Hidden within that "Canticle to the Fallen Moon" lay Neb's destiny, and he welcomed it.
This crescent is a map of the moon. But it also matches the metal of Winters's axe. Could this axe of Winters be part of her dreaming ability? Should this crescent be matched up with the axe?
The song Canticle of the Fallen Moon is a big clue to what ever is going to happen. I was hoping we would get the words to the song when Rudolfo started to sing. I think Rudolfos clues of what the song is about is a big thing as well. I will have to search those out of my notes after dinner here to add them to our list.
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Nadine:
I'm in full agreement here. I will have to go back and check out the Axe as well. I think you have a good theory here but I'm not sure if Winters had the axe when they were dreaming. Hanric might have had it. I think the axe had some special additional powers -- Winters could see the blood magic individuals in its reflecting surface even though they were totally invisible. But it would seem that Crescent and the Axe were both of the same "moon" or magic metal.
While I'm looking back at this I might have to go back to the cave -- it is the place where the Dream Books are. Interesting parallels that this "library" of Dream Books seems similar the Vlad Li Tam's library that he destroyed in Lamentation. And maybe everything is connect to the great library that was destroyed in Windwir and the Sanctorium Lux destroyed in The Churning Waste. And we can't forget that Rudolfo is building a library in an effort to save "the light." All these libraries must have some special significance and relationship to each other but right now I don't know what.
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11-08-2009 07:22 PM
Melhay wrote:
kenscholes wrote:Hi All! It's been fun watching the speculation and then seeing as some of you hit the finish line. Sorry to have been so quiet -- the book tour, combined with World Fantasy, took it out of me. You'll be pleased to hear that Antiphon is indeed turned in, revisions and all, and I'm getting ready to sink my teeth into Requiem.
I'm very happy to answer questions but at this point, it's probably most useful if they're gathered up in one email and sent over to me. I'm happy to take a stab at them, though, at any time.
Some of you are scary-good at figuring out where I'm headed.
SPOILER ALERT:
I've seen talk about the metal Charles and am wondering if anyone picked up on the fact that he's not really named Charles, that he was merely scripted (by Charles, who was in captivity with him) to bear the message in an attempt to find and warn Petronus. Alas, the message arrived a bit late.
I may not have been clear enough there.
I'm glad you folks are enjoying the books. Again, happy to answer questions if you have any. Gather them up at the end of a week and send them along. Feel free to keep at me, too, and I'll come back and answer as needed.
I love having you folks as a part of my readership. Big thanks to Paul for having me out again. I'll keep bouncing into the room to see what's up but don't be shy. I'm easily found but starting to heat up for volume 4....
By the way, did anyone else pick up on the notion that an antiphon is a response to a canticle?
Hey Ken,
I think this is a sign of an awesome author with an epic tale to tell.
You have given us the clues, yet there are many pieces that could go in any direction. We are taking the wonderous story you have told and try to piece the pieces together along with the mystery that is still not answered yet. You have laid the many paths for us, we just have to choose one. We think he have picked the proper path but at any time we could come to a fork in the road and have to guess again. Your story can go in any direction, we are just trying to pick the most logical one in this world. Which you could always change on us.
But, Ken, if you ever need any help just drop us a line. I know I would love to help you out with any story.
Melissa
Ken wrote:
Some of you are scary-good at figuring out where I'm headed.
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Did you notice that Ken didn't tell us what we figured out! Now we just have to figure out what we figured out was right and discount all the rest that we didn't figure out correctly and we have it made!
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11-08-2009 07:30 PM
Okay, I have found Rudolfo's thoughts on the song from his mother singing it to him.
page 376:
How long since she sang this to me? He could not remember, and he felt a tug of loss when he sought her face in his memory and could not find it. But he remembered these lyrics. They sopke of love requited, though with sacrifices made, of bargaining pools in the basement of the world and ghosts that swam a haunted sea. It was a song about tears and separation, desperate hope and misguided faith. It was a song about the love between a Weeping Czar and a Moon Wizard's daughter.
Now also since the bargaining pools are mentioned in this paragraph in reference to the song, I wanted to add the thoughts Rudolfo had on the bargaining pools a little earlier in the book.
page 320:
...This structure was made for bloodletting, from its viewing balcony to the cutting floor, through the system of pipes down into the distillery he knew must be buried in the deeper basements.
Rudolfo had certainly read the stories as a child. He was familiar with the bargaining pools and their access to the dark spirits of the Beneath Places, where blood and anguish could purchase favors and power. His own Tormentor's Row, now closed these eight months, followed a similar design to those Blood Temples of old but only retained the notion of redemptive cutting, having no use for the blood that was spilled in the pursuit of that atonement.
Now, I just had a crazy thought in typing this on the bargaining pools. I was asking why Li Tam's family blood was so imporant. It seems that anyones blood could be used for blood letting. BUT, since we know who they are decendants of ~ could it be that one of the dark spirits in the Beneath Places is Y'Zir? Could he be asking for the blood of the Frederico family? Could Ria be doing this in exchange for what ever it is she wants or needs? In the above section it mentions that "blood and anguish could purchase favors and power". So does Ria want something? Could this be why Machtvolk can use the blood magics and are so powerful?
Just more food for thought for you...
"There are no honorable causes. There is no good or evil. Evil is only what we call those who oppose us." From Nyphron Rising, By Michael J. Sullivan
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11-08-2009 07:43 PM
Ken wrote:
Some of you are scary-good at figuring out where I'm headed.
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Nadine wrote:
Did you notice that Ken didn't tell us what we figured out! Now we just have to figure out what we figured out was right and discount all the rest that we didn't figure out correctly and we have it made!
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Hey Nadine,
I think that may be easier said then done. We all have thrown some great stuff into the mix here. So, where do we start eliminating at? ![]()
"There are no honorable causes. There is no good or evil. Evil is only what we call those who oppose us." From Nyphron Rising, By Michael J. Sullivan
My Blog Spot: http://melissa-melsworld.blogspot.com/
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11-08-2009 08:10 PM
Nadine wrote:
I agree, Paul. We didn't have a lot of Isaak, Neb, or Charles (both) in Canticle except for either introducing them or redirecting them. They are being set up for the next book. A lot of ground work was done in Canticle to set the foundation for the next book and probably the rest of the series. We will see the development of all of this in Antiphon. I think a lot of Antiphon will take place in the Waste Lands because that is where the characters (and we) have to go to find answers to a lot of questions presented in Canticle -- and there are a lot of questions and a lot of characters heading in that direction! The end of Canticle threw me (and probably some others) into a spin and in a totally new direction.
I'm with you there, Nadine. I too think that the Churning Wastes will be a pivotal setting in Antiphon – and the mysteries within it... well, you can only speculate. When I finished this installment, I thought of the television show Lost ( I only watched the first few years) – just an amazing amount of plot twists and revelations compressed into a few hundred pages.
I also believe that the tone of Antiphon will become increasingly that of an apocalyptic SF thriller – and by that I mean more SF elements, more glimpses into humankind's past... I mean, don't the Churning Wastes kind of remind you of The Planet of the Apes' Forbidden Zone?
Paul
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11-08-2009 08:18 PM
Melhay wrote:
I think this is a sign of an awesome author with an epic tale to tell...
Melissa:
You're so right. These novels are CLASSIC – there is no doubt in my mind. Now let's see if Lamentation or Canticle make it to the Nebula and/or Hugo awards list for Best Novel 2010....
Paul
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11-08-2009 09:08 PM
Melhay wrote:Just a few things I picked up in reading that I wanted to mention as ideas.
Ghosting Crest:
This name just reminds me of possible spirits, with Ghost and for some reason Crest stricks me as well. Could this be the sea Frederico saw Amals spirit in? Or could this be where spirits have gone from trying to cross here?
Younger Gods:
Page 268 - There is a reference to one of the Younger Gods being woken up by Y’Zirs spells. Could this come to be important in the future books? Where is this awake Younger God? Can this Younger God help the people of Y'Zir or the people of the earth?
Pg 356 – Just remember that Jin Li Tams name comes from D’Jin of the Younger Gods. Is this in part where the Great Mother name comes from?
Pg 371 - On this page there is mention of a war of the Younger Gods. What war of the Younger Gods? I don't remember much to this from prior books or stories. Does anyone else remember this being mentioned before?
The Younger Gods have been mentioned before but right now I don't remember in what capacity. I think this is the first that we have learned of a war of the Younger Gods. There are many things we really don't know yet but I think we will discover in Antiphon. Like we really don't know for sure the relationship between Y'Zir and P'Andro Whym. We do know that he might have been resposible for the death of Y'Zir's seven sons, but we don't know why he would have killed them or if this was to be "his sins" that required such an elaborate revenge.
I wondered too about Jin being named after one of the Younger Gods and this might have some significance but I don't know if we have that information yet. Actually, I am very curious about Jin and her heretage. Why is she the Great Mother and is treated totally differently than the rest of the Li Tam family. I will come back to this subject later but some of the crazy thoughts running through my brain right now are 1) she might not be a Li Tam at all but have another blood line like a descendent of Amal, 2) she has red hair and could she be the prophesied Crimson Queen, 3) through her blood line will Jakob have a daughter who will be the Crimson Queen.
Number 1 is not possible since Amal died before having any children.
Number 2 is really far fetched.
Number 3 is the most likely but I have a feeling the Crimson Queen exists now and is pulling the strings or a way is being prepared for her and her followers expect it to be eminent. A daughter of Jakob is too far in the future, though Jakob has 40 years to do something and before something happens to him.
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11-08-2009 09:25 PM - edited 11-08-2009 09:30 PM
I'm still up in the air on the metal men. I still think they are key in all of this and they (or one of them) may be the master controller. I think they are generally capable of emotions. Isaak sure was and Charles (metal) was also.
This whole series was inspired by a short story Ken wrote. Illustration for story.
Ken posted this in the Lamentation thread:
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As to inspiration, the series started out as a short story, "Of Metal Men and Scarlet Thread and Dancing with the Sunrise," originally written for a small press magazine that had a call out for stories featuring mechanical oddities. I cooked one up about Rudolfo's Gypsy Scouts finding a metal man sobbing in the middle of a devastated city, not really thinking at all that I might do much more there.
The magazine filled up before story got to them but Realms of Fantasy liked it and bought it. And they hired Allen Douglas to illustrate it. When I saw his depiction of Isaak, I knew immediately that there was more to the story than I realized. (You can see his art at http://www.pen-paper.net/artgallery/AllenDouglas/O
f+Metal+Men_010+LR10h.jpg.html)
I started thinking and at the time (because I was ridiculously frightened of writing novels) I was pretty sure I'd do a cycle of four interconnected short stories called The Androfrancine Cycle. But the second story, "Of Missing Kings and Backward Dreams and the Honoring of Lies," didn't quite stand alone for Realms's tastes so the editor sent it back with a note suggesting I write a novel with these characters in this world. Between that and a Great Big Dare by Jay Lake and my wife Jen West Scholes, I ended up bookending those stories and filling in the gaps between to create Lamentation.
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I think Long Walks and Other Strange Journeys is the anthology where you will find the original Metal Man story -- " a mysterious metal man with the power to bring down a city and the heart to weep for it"
P.S. Doesn't this "Add Product" work any more?
Melhay wrote:I have many questions as to the Metal Man Charles. I think there is much in mystery here with these metal men and the waste lands. I think I like Nadine are starting to wonder on these metal men being more than just what everyone thinks they are.
***SPOILERS***
Metal Man Charles:
Why is this Metal Man Charles acting human? It seems to be the way he acts in the wastes. Does it seem that the further in he goes the more human he acts?
Pg 270 – he is laughing. Why? How did this metal man know who Neb was and that he was coming?
Pg 295 How can Metal Charles laugh & cry with the song in the Wastes when he is metal? He is not to have feelings right?
Pg 291 – The Metal Man Charles says that Introspect III is the only one to give authorization to the Santorum Lux. How old was Introspect III? Did he and Neb live at the same time? Did Nebs Dad arrange this some how?
Pg 292 – The Metal Man Charles recognizes Neb as the Homeseeker, which is a Marsher believe. How is it that the metal man who is from Androfrancine believes this? Did the Y’Zir Marsher followers get a hold of him and rescript him? Are the Marshers integrated some how into the Androfrancine religion? What could this mean, disaster saving?
Pg 271 – Where did Neb get the words he said to the Metal Man to go with him to the Santorum Lux? In a dream?
Pg 329 – How does the Metal Charles know of the Dreams? Are the metal men dreaming? They aren’t human right??? Could this be how he new Neb was coming, through a dream or by Nebs father? I am thinking Nebs father arranged for Neb to have access when the time came but I still am not sure how he was aware of the dreams and details of them.
Metal Man Charles believe the Sanctorum Lux should be destroyed to protect everyone. Why or how does he feel or believe? So the metal men burned the library.
Pg 331 has lots of questions for me:
What is the Great Response? The metal Charles says he is not going to participate in.
What dream told of the library being more? Does the Metal man now wish he didn’t burn it? Then the metal man gives the scrolls in him to Neb, scrolls of the whole library.
Pg 352 – Charles the man says that the metal men would NOT have been scripted to destroy the library, that this is out of character for them. So, what is in this Library that the master controller did not want shared?
These metal men are starting to really make me wonder. They could really be a great help but at the same time they can be a great enemy, being that the scripts can easily be tampered with.
