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dhaupt
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Week Two One Mountain Away- Analiese

We haven't talked about Reverend Ana yet in our discussion

 

What are your feelings about her

 

How do you like the relationship she and Charlotte have formed

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Mountain_Muse
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Ahhhh, I love this. A whole string, just for the Rev. :-)

I love Ana. I would love to know her personal back story. Females in the clergy do not have an easy go of it to begin with. This is one profession that is still very male dominated and in some denominations, females are still not allowed to wear "the collar". That said, I love Ana's heart. I love her kindness, I love that she listens and that she hears not just words, but the heart and soul of the individual. But most of all, I love that she loves Charlotte where she is, for who she is and is opening to the spontaneous friendship that is budding.
Ministers don't have the privilege to often find a friend within their congregation, but I think a bond is slowly developing between these two lonely women.

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This will probably sound odd, but at first I didn’t like Analiese.  I thought she was judgmental.  However, as I got to know more about her and about Charlotte’s past, I understood her anger toward and her distrust of Charlotte when we witnessed their first scene together. 

 

Now I am enjoying their conversations more and more.  Along with Charlotte’s diary entries, her conversations with Analiese tell us more about the inner workings of Charlotte’s mind and the heartfelt regrets she now has.  Analiese has turned out to be one of my favorite characters.  She is always listening (without judging) and is always ready for an adventure.

 

BTW, I always liked the name Analiese, and the meaning I found for it is “graced with God's bounty.”

 

This brings up a question for Emilie --- how do you choose your characters’ names? 

Catherine
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Re: Week Two One Mountain Away- Analiese

I like Muse liked Analiese right away

I love her humor, her humility and her sense of right and wrong, how she's not judgemental

 

I hope that in the next novel we learn more about her background, I'd be interested to find out more about her childhood obesity and her failed marriage.

 

Thanks for all your comments

 

BTW, do you like the way the questions are rolling this and last month less like a test and more like a conversation starter, I love feedback

 

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Yes, I do like the new format. Makes me want to pour a cuppa and smell the aroma as I think over how I want to respond, instead of writing an essay. :-)... You're doing a great job and everyone seems to really be putting some thought into what they have to say.
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Mountain_Muse wrote:
Yes, I do like the new format. Makes me want to pour a cuppa and smell the aroma as I think over how I want to respond, instead of writing an essay. :-)... You're doing a great job and everyone seems to really be putting some thought into what they have to say.
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Thanks Muse

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dhaupt wrote:

BTW, do you like the way the questions are rolling this and last month less like a test and more like a conversation starter, I love feedback

 


I like this format too.  I think it is working well.  :smileyhappy:

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Catherine111 wrote:

dhaupt wrote:

BTW, do you like the way the questions are rolling this and last month less like a test and more like a conversation starter, I love feedback

 


I like this format too.  I think it is working well.  :smileyhappy:


Thanks Catherine :smileyhappy:

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Analiese is one of my favorite characters.  Having known LOTS of ministers, male and female, she is something of a composite.  (I am a minister's wife.  He just retired after 40 years in the pulpit.)  Struggling not to judge others is probably one of life's greatest hurdles, and minister's don't get an easy pass on that one or on any of life's challenges.

 

How did I choose her name?  I'm not sure, to be quite honest.  I think that one just popped into my head.  I am careful not to have too many character names that "look" alike, i.e. they begin with the same letter or have the same general sound.  Of course that's not always possible in a long book, particularly in a series.  And sometimes a character who's written to be minor-minor turns into a major character who happens to have a similar name to someone else and it can't be changed.

 

The trials and tribulations of authorhood.

 

However I find names to be super-important.  Vital.  And I have been known to come to a complete halt on a book until I find the right one, sometimes for days.  Once I've selected one, editor beware.  If I change the name, I feel I have to change the character, too.  Quirky, I know.

 

However, that being said, my editor after her first look at this book said that she found Taylor and Morgan hard to keep straight, both last names as first names.  You might ask who Morgan is?  Five minutes after I read that Morgan was effortlessly changed to Maddie.  For some reason the change worked better in my mind, too, and I didn't mind coming up with another name.  But that's rare.

 

Names must also fit trends at the time.  Unless they don't.  There's an eleven-year-old Edna in this book.  Go figure.  She was just Edna from the moment she popped up in the story.  No hope of changing it.

 

Another great discussion.  You rock.

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Minister's wife? Go fig! I grew up in a parsonage myself. My daughter just finished her master's in theology at Fuller Seminary in Pasadena, CA.
No wonder you were so "spot on" with Ana. Only someone who has lived for years in a "glass house" and under the expectations of a congregation can truly understand the pull and demands. Knowing this also adds many more layers of insight to your characters. I'm loving the story more every day and am glad to know why I felt such a kinship to Ana.
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dhaupt wrote:

 

BTW, do you like the way the questions are rolling this and last month less like a test and more like a conversation starter, I love feedback

 


I really like the new format, it gives us all a little room to think. I need all the room I can get!

 

It's funny, but one of the reasons I also liked Ana is that she wasn't perfect. Sometimes I think that ministers and other people in the 'religion profession' are portrayed as people that have no flaws, make few mistakes, at least in initial portrayal. Because Ana was impatient and unhappy with Charlotte, I immediately felt a more human connection with her. Thanks for that, Emilie!

Elaine

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Glad Analiese's frailities work for you, Elaine, and for MM, glad this fits with your own knowledge and experience.  This would seem familiar to you.

 

Ministers are often portrayed as dunces.  I've seen it again and again.  Bumbling idiots or pompous bores.  Remember the minister/cousin, Mr. Collins, in Pride and Prejudice?  I shudder.

 

Sam, the minister in my Shenandoah Album series, is one of my own favorite characters, and he struggles with his humanity most of all.  And I've done a five part mystery series about a minister's wife, with all kinds of "insider information."  That's been a joy to write and I hope to do more.  Aggie gets in the most absurd situations.

 

We use what we know and what interests us in our stories.  I've enjoyed using all these and look forward to Analiese having a book of our own along the way.

 

 

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Emelie,

 

I look forward to reading Ana';s book.  It is sure to be one that hits a deep chord.

 

Muse

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Well it looks like I touched on a good topic w/Ana

 

Emilie I LOVE Sam from your Shenandoah series

and of course Aggie from your Ministry is Murder series

 

the rest of you need to check out Emilie's other series and her stand a lones too.

 

thank you for all of your comments, thoughts and ideas

 

I knew you would all come to love this novel and Emilie too :smileyhappy:

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I wasn't sure what to expect from Analiese. In the beginning when we meet Charlotte we know she's changed and is looking to talk to Analiese, but I wasn't sure after their previous altercations where Analiese's thoughts on Charlotte would lie. I was pleasantly surprised. She gave her great advice when they talked about Minnie Marlborough's death. Analiese didn't judge Charlotte on her past actions, but she was honest with her. Charlotte wanted to write a check to the animal shelter to make up for evicting Minnie, but Analiese told her Minnie wouldn't want a handout. She was a person who had her hand outstretched to help. Charlotte really took that to heart. Analiese sensed that Charlotte had to no one else to turn to and has made a real effort to reach out to and befriend Charlotte. Analiese is a great listener and has the ability to know when to push Charlotte to open up and when to wait patiently for Charlotte to get her thoughts in order. That is a great quality to have.

 

Deb, I like the new format. I think it's working out really well. Thanks for all your hard work!

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What do you think of Ana's past, her TV career and her childhood obesity. Did any of this effect who she is today or was it just irrelevant background information.

Did it in any way have an effect on how you felt about her.

 

 

I'm almost done with the novel

I can't wait for the next one :smileyhappy:

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We are all a compilation of our life's experiences and how we can filed them on our shelf of experiences. Some experiences we file away in a deep file of forgetfulness. Other experiences mold the very fiber of who we become. It's funny how a kind word from a stranger or friend said in passing can have as much affect on who we become as four years of college and a life of striving towards a goal.
To me, Ana used each of these life experiences as building blocks on which she built her life. For one (obesity) she learned tolerance and compassion, for the other, she learned to listen and to observe human character. Both of these came to serve her well as a minister.
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