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Paul_Hochman
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Link to New Ending (Spoiler -- Obviously!)

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Shapatm
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Re: Link to New Ending (Spoiler -- Obviously!)

I like it!  Its a great teaser for a second book!  Completely not fair but wonderful.

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peacelovevegan
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Oh, oh, oh! You folks are just spoiling us... first early copies of the book, now this? :smileyhappy: I love the last line at the end of the ARC copy... but I think I like this better. Definitely teasing!! We want more too! Crescendo will be a long wait LOL.

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I like it, it sets up perfectly for a second novel.

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GReba
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***fanning myself*** Where am I?  I think I fainted!  :smileytongue:

The ARC was great as is, but the new ending works just as well.....can't WAIT for the second installment....

 

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MsReaderCP
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I think I missed something.  I know Becca had to change it from a stand alone to a "can' wait to buy the 2nd book" - and I can't wait because she did a good job with so many other factors. But where do these 2 pages go?  If at the end, what all pages come out?  also  I didn't get p. 237-238 in my book, is everyone's copy like that? (after I totally bummed when my copy  went from 232-239, I thumbed through until I found the missing pages of 233-236,but now I've finished the book and there was no 237-238:smileysad:   I can somewhat guess what happened from p. 236 and 239, but part of my review of this book is going to be how suspenseful it is and Nora is just starting to "toe" around in Patch's Jeep looking for clues!  and then in my book he's back and mad because she found a paint gun.  In other words, you truly can't put this book down without missing something!!

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Hmmmmmmmmm i dont know what one i like more ! I loved the story tho it was amazing down to each and every page

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amt19
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I liked the first ending but I think this one is better :smileyhappy:

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jaxz_book-babe
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This was great! I was expecting more than just one single page though. I  have to admit that one single page got me even more hooked for a sequal.

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liisa22
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More!!  whew.....   

 

 

yeah- I LIKE IT!!!  

 

steamy without getting explicit!  (I am thinking about the intended audience-  YA) 

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tato
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Re: Link to New Ending (Spoiler -- Obviously!)

I really liked the original ending with the whole irony of being a guardian angel and working on security in the human world. But this one is really nice, too...steamy, I would say. It would be perfect if you could blend them together and use both, because Patch's new job is a pretty cool idea.

 

Great read, I can't wait for the next one Becca!

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i agree, liked the original ending better.

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Rosei
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This is a lovely new ending! I like both, the original and the new one. Both fit the novel as a whole.

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Zia01
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I was fine with the ending we got in the ARC but after reading this one, I like this one much more!

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RS18
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This ending is so much better!! The other one was fine, but this one is really good. It definitely leaves the reader wanting more. Good call on switching it back to the original!

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I guess the new ending makes it feel more complete.  I thought the first ending was fine.

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I do like both endings....this one is definitely steamier!  :smileywink:

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I like this ending more than the one in the ARC for some reason.....

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I actually like the new ending better and the security system work could be the lead in for the next book :smileyhappy:

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Re: Link to New Ending (Spoiler -- Obviously!)

 


Teddyree wrote:

I actually like the new ending better and the security system work could be the lead in for the next book :smileyhappy:


I was thinking about how I liked the ARC ending because of the security stuff, but if it gets put into the next book, then I'd like this ending.  It does leave me wanting more (as did the other ending), but this one is steamy, like others have said and it leaves it on a good note.  I like both-I just hope we get to see more of that ARC ending-I'm curious about those detectives!

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