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12-06-2010 03:41 PM
Exactly it's like everyone is a pawn. Scary stuff.
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12-06-2010 04:26 PM
It's very interesting the intricacies of Piet Hoffman's (Paula's) involvement on both sides, I think. I'm beginning to be most connected to him in this story because of that involvement. I am on the last bit of part one and trying to finish it up, but so far I am really worried about Piet's family and how they might become a part of this mess he's made by becoming so intertwined with the Polish mafia and also if the Swedish police get in too much of a tangle from Grens' investigation they might just let Piet take a fall.
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12-06-2010 07:22 PM
I also am enjoying reading this book and cant wait to have time this evening to read part 2. I had similar feelings regarding the names in the book. I find it confusing when unfamiliar names are similar and they seem to merge in my mind. I found this to be true with the Dragon Tattoo series.
I am also finding some of the translation not flowing. I didnt find this to be the case with the Larsson books. I read the first in American Engilsh and the other two in the Queen's English since I was not willing to wait for the books to be released here.
Neither of these comments are going to prevent me from finishing the books. I am finding it difficult to tell whether Piet/Paula is a good guy or not and whether the police and Erik are as they seem to be. I keep hoping that Piet's wife and kids are not hurt by what is coming up.
thewanderingjew wrote:I really am enjoying this book but all of the long names of streets and places can be distracting for me because it is hard to read them, let alone pronounce them out loud! Reading the Larsson trilogy, I had the same experience. Because I have no frame of reference for these places, it sounds like gobbledy-**bleep** to me, at times. Does anyone else feel this way?
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12-07-2010 12:28 AM
Sorry I am a bit late getting in the discussion. The book is fantastic. I have just been swamped with family obligations and getting ready for the holidays. I'm sure you all can relate!
So now to get caught up with the discussion and posts...
"A room without a book is like a body without a soul"
~Marcus Tullius Cicero
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12-07-2010 12:42 AM
1. There is a fine line between good and evil. If you blur that line what do you become? Human.
2. The bullet that entered the victims head split in two. Other things in the novel that are split.
Buyer
anish informant-posing as meth buyer
Eric: policeman-unknown
Piet/Paula: informant-family man
Grens; grieving widower-old school cop
yellow tulips:gift for warden-meth transport
Storage Books: poetry & other seldom checked out titles-deliver gun parts, charges, & meth
I am sure there are more connections. Feel free to add to the list,
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12-07-2010 06:50 AM
beak77 wrote:1. There is a fine line between good and evil. If you blur that line what do you become? Human.
2. The bullet that entered the victims head split in two. Other things in the novel that are split.
Buyer
anish informant-posing as meth buyer
Eric: policeman-unknown
Piet/Paula: informant-family man
Grens; grieving widower-old school cop
yellow tulips:gift for warden-meth transport
Storage Books: poetry & other seldom checked out titles-deliver gun parts, charges, & meth
I am sure there are more connections. Feel free to add to the list,
You covered it very well , beak77 I will add The Church..Bomb..to detonate I think when he plans to escape..But have no idea,will be starting Part 3 this week..Susan
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12-07-2010 11:07 AM
I am struggling to follow the story line especially with regards to names. The flipping back and forth between the mules story line and Erik's storyline has been a bit confusing. It will be interesting to see who really are the good guys and who are the bad guys.
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12-07-2010 01:35 PM
I agree, although I'm finding myself very interested and anxious to find out what is happening next. I'm enjoying the book a lot but I'm hoping that I get more of a flow going as I continue to read.
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12-07-2010 01:41 PM
I agree, I have had some issues with the closeness in names also.
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12-07-2010 04:10 PM
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12-07-2010 07:15 PM
Gren seems to have been in mourning since his wife died on a full-time basis, and just doing his job as a sideline. Not knowing what a CD player is shows that his head has been buried underground for a very long time. By boxing up his cassettes, he is leaving the past behind and trying to move on with his life.
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12-07-2010 07:43 PM
btrflylili0128 wrote:You can pretty much tell who is bad and who is good. The author does well in distinguishing the two, but I am suspending judgement on Erik Wilson. It may be far fetched, but I think he's just not that noble.Hoffman- family man, but loves his job way too much; he put his kids in grave danger.Grens- miserable man suffering the loss of a loved one, but great cop...sort of like House, only different occupation.Wilson- Seems to be a good cop; don't know much about his background, that I remember at the moment.Grens, again, miserable, suffering the loss of a loved one, but great cop. You can tell he's figuring out what happened already. He put away the cassettes to forget about the past. He's "over it" (he will never get over it, in my mind).For some odd reason I really like Grens, he reminds me of House; I love house. You can tell he is a really good cop, only he lost his drive to be the best of the best when the tragedy hit.We open the novel in the perspective of one of the Polish "mules" taking drugs into Stockholm for us the readers to really get a sense of what is going on. To feel what's going on in Hoffman's life and what he has to go through undercover.*Difficult book to get into at first, but it gets really good once you start learning about the characters; you get into. Now I actually want to keep reading...
I don't think it's very far fetched to think that Wilson is not a good man. It would seem Piet is unable to fully trust the man either (as evidenced by the fact that he took careful note of Grens name upon hearing he was a good cop)
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12-07-2010 09:23 PM
thewanderingjew wrote:I really am enjoying this book but all of the long names of streets and places can be distracting for me because it is hard to read them, let alone pronounce them out loud! Reading the Larsson trilogy, I had the same experience. Because I have no frame of reference for these places, it sounds like gobbledy-**bleep** to me, at times. Does anyone else feel this way?
I feel the same way. My way of getting around it is by ignoring the references. I too read the Larsson trilogy and by the third book I decided that I would no longer even TRY to pronounce the names. I just quickly glance over it and sort of make up a street name that I think it looks like. So far this has helped me be less distracted by the "language barrier".
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12-07-2010 09:52 PM
Okay, "guys," (that's gals, too), please show us the close reading that has so many of you so distrusting of Erik. Somehow, I haven't gone there. What have I been overlooking or perhaps discounting? Or, is it an American general cultural distrust of people who have jobs/roles like his?
Pepper
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12-07-2010 09:56 PM
OKC_NookJA wrote:I for one plan on sticking it out. My criticisms are meant to be constructive. I like reviewing a book with the intent of giving feedback. This is really helping me learn more about constructing characters and stories and I hope my feedback will help.
A general question: is the purpose of First Looks to give feedback both positive and negative? I would assume it is since only giving positive feedback doesn't accomplish anything.
I am almost done with Part One and will give a more detailed analysis of my thoughts them. in a day or two.
Thanks,
James
It's interesting that you mention the feedback. This is my fourth (I think) FL club selection and the first two I read were almost all positive feedback. IMO the books were OK, and I almost felt bad giving negative feedback. But that's what makes us all better - the positive and the negative. I try to give a good balance of the two when giving my opinions.
Lisa
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12-07-2010 10:16 PM - edited 12-07-2010 10:17 PM
JoanieGranola wrote:
OKC_NookJA wrote:I for one plan on sticking it out. My criticisms are meant to be constructive. I like reviewing a book with the intent of giving feedback. This is really helping me learn more about constructing characters and stories and I hope my feedback will help.
A general question: is the purpose of First Looks to give feedback both positive and negative? I would assume it is since only giving positive feedback doesn't accomplish anything.
I am almost done with Part One and will give a more detailed analysis of my thoughts them. in a day or two.
Thanks,
James
It's interesting that you mention the feedback. This is my fourth (I think) FL club selection and the first two I read were almost all positive feedback. IMO the books were OK, and I almost felt bad giving negative feedback. But that's what makes us all better - the positive and the negative. I try to give a good balance of the two when giving my opinions.
Lisa
I suspect honest feedback or feedback with integrity is among the most valuable. It is only too easy to discount either excessively positive or negative feedback -- at least that's the sense with which I grapple both in giving and in receiving feedback.
Some believe the positive should be taken for granted; that the way to help others and oneself grow is to give and receive information on the shortcomings. I have lived in that world; I long ago ceased buying into it.
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12-08-2010 12:07 AM
Peppermill wrote:
JoanieGranola wrote:
OKC_NookJA wrote:I for one plan on sticking it out. My criticisms are meant to be constructive. I like reviewing a book with the intent of giving feedback. This is really helping me learn more about constructing characters and stories and I hope my feedback will help.
A general question: is the purpose of First Looks to give feedback both positive and negative? I would assume it is since only giving positive feedback doesn't accomplish anything.
I am almost done with Part One and will give a more detailed analysis of my thoughts them. in a day or two.
Thanks,
James
It's interesting that you mention the feedback. This is my fourth (I think) FL club selection and the first two I read were almost all positive feedback. IMO the books were OK, and I almost felt bad giving negative feedback. But that's what makes us all better - the positive and the negative. I try to give a good balance of the two when giving my opinions.
Lisa
I suspect honest feedback or feedback with integrity is among the most valuable. It is only too easy to discount either excessively positive or negative feedback -- at least that's the sense with which I grapple both in giving and in receiving feedback.
Some believe the positive should be taken for granted; that the way to help others and oneself grow is to give and receive information on the shortcomings. I have lived in that world; I long ago ceased buying into it.
I like your term "feedback with integrity". I hope when I'm commenting I'm also giving some sense of myself as a reader, so others can judge whether or not my point of view might be valid for them. And for the publishers to get a sense of what sort of readers they should target their marketing to. I try to stay away from reviewing genres that I wouldn't normally be interested in at all; for me, an example would be sci - fi. That would be really difficult for me to review fairly. If you don't like history, of course you'll think a long bio of one of the Founding Fathers is boring, or too wordy, or whatever. Sometimes in signing up for a First Look, you might get surprised with a disappointment in that it's just not something you would normally have picked up to read. But with so many of us commenting, honestly, I think a balance can be reached. The other important thing is to comment specifically on the work. What, exactly, did you like or dislike? And then if both positve and negative comments are included, others reading them - to make a purchasing decision, for instance - can garner really useful information.
Just wanted to say, too, that I think when a book gets to FL, it's pretty much the final draft. We aren't going to change this one. But I think our reactions can be useful to the author in his continued work. If we really liked a character, he might be encouraged about writing a sequel, for instance.
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12-08-2010 12:25 AM - edited 12-08-2010 12:31 AM
Why do we open the novel in the perspective of one of the Polish "mules" taking drugs into Stockholm?
The opening tells us place (Poland) and the subject (Drug running) which wets your appetite for whats coming. This book, from what I've read in part one, is beginning with a great introduction to the subject of the book. After this introduction we have a whole story ahead of us left to be told. PLOT.
Cora
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12-08-2010 12:50 AM
Yes, These kind of books (the ones that start out jumping all over) most the time turn out to have the best plots.
I usually start them with a tablet and make a chart to keep the pieces together. After a few chapters a pattern starts to show up. Then the characters start to fall into place.
I see a good read ahead of us.
Cora
CubicleBlindness wrote:Well I am not prepared at all for this first weeks discussion. I read these questions on Monday and have been thinking about them for two days now, reading the other comments and have to admit there is just so much happening in the first section I felt lost and a little overwhelmed.
I want to agree with bud12 that so far the characters all seem like some kind of mule. That was a great comment.
I agree with pen21 that I am also trying just to sort all the characters out. I cannot say that I have really come to like or dislike any of them and will have to read some more before deciding.
I also agree with LorettaP that I found myself have to re-read several pages over because it jumps back and forth and like I said I felt kinda overwhelmed with so much information in this beginning section.