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11-21-2009 02:53 PM
And take this moment and make you my family
And finally you have found someone perfect
Finally you have found
~RHCP
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11-21-2009 03:39 PM
sure! ( cause im not looking @ my nanowrimo, and i need to write just for fun...)
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11-21-2009 05:03 PM
Of Coarse! ![]()
What are we going to make it about?
Sometimes people give up,
other times they move on,
and sometimes they just stay still.
I turned to the clarinets. They were a resourceful lot.~Jennifer Echols, Major Crush
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11-21-2009 06:22 PM
hmmm...*thinkthinkthink*
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11-21-2009 06:42 PM
yeah idk what we can do one about. so if anybody could think something up that would be great. ![]()
And take this moment and make you my family
And finally you have found someone perfect
Finally you have found
~RHCP
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11-21-2009 07:16 PM
ohoo new add on?! yay!
lol.. hmmn what havent we made an add on about here?...
*ponders*
*ponders some more..*
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11-21-2009 07:19 PM
Sometimes people give up,
other times they move on,
and sometimes they just stay still.
I turned to the clarinets. They were a resourceful lot.~Jennifer Echols, Major Crush
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11-21-2009 07:42 PM
ok this is totally random but sumat like 5 teens get a visons something that happend in the fututre somehow these 5 people are all linked to that vision and they come together to stop it , make sure it never hapens etc lmao who knows just a idea from the top of my head ![]()
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11-21-2009 07:49 PM
hmmn.. i think i really love that idea blue! ![]()
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11-21-2009 09:22 PM
I agree. That sounds awesome. And I've kinda been wanting to start an add-on as well so this is just perfect. Lol. Okay so I vote that whoever adds onto the post has to do 1 out of the 5 characters and whoever does the next one switches to the POV of another character. That way it would keep it interesting.
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11-22-2009 02:13 PM
Yeah good idea. So whos gonna start this thing?
And take this moment and make you my family
And finally you have found someone perfect
Finally you have found
~RHCP
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11-22-2009 03:44 PM
*raises hand* I guess I shall. Give me a few minutes though.
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11-22-2009 04:50 PM
"Lynn! Get your butt out of bed!" I groaned and rolled over, dragging my covers over my head. It was way too early to be awake.
"Lynn!" came my mothers irritated yell again.
"Coming!" I yelled, reluctantly rolling out of bed. I stumbled to my bathroom, depositing my pajamas on the floor as I went. I grabbed a bra off the linoleum and quickly put it on. My short sandy blond hair was sticking up all over the place.
"Great," I muttered, trying to tame my crazy spikes. I shouldn't have fallen asleep with so much gel and hairspray in my hair. Smeared eyeliner and shadow covered my face, remnants from last nights party. I turned the faucet on and splashed my face and hair with steaming hot water, scrubbing violently. My face emerged pink and clean after a few minutes. I went in search for a pair of jeans. I kicked aside piles of clothes and finally found my splatter painted jeans. Mom had been furious when she saw what I had done to my 100 dollar jeans. My excuse of, I was adding my own personal style, didn't go over well with her. They slid onto my skinny frame and I grabbed a see-through tank top from my dresser. I searched for the adorable new shirt I had just bought.
"Where in the world!" I muttered under my breath, peeking under my bed. "That's where those shoes went!" I grabbed my old pair of Rocketdogs and flung them towards my closet. Sadly my new shirt was no where to be seen. I plopped onto my bed in exhasperation. A tell tale crinkle of plastic alerted me.
"Ahha!" I cried triumphantly, pulling the bag out from under my covers. I slipped on my new printed tee and practically ran down stairs. My mom was already holding my backpack out for me, along with a granola bar.
"Thanks mom," I said breathlessly. I kissed her on the cheek, and grabbed my car keys off the table.
"Happy birthday honey," she called after me as I ran down the driveway. I waved back before diving into my car. Some way to start off my seventeenth birthday, I thought as I put my keys into the ignition. Hopefully the rest of my day would go a little smoother.
(Okay so I had the thought. What if it is ALL of their birthdays today? And they were all born at exactly the same time? It kinda makes sense since they are all 'linked' together. Make sure there are some guy characters as well por favor! Whoever's next gets to do another character! )
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11-22-2009 05:32 PM
(ok so we are changing povs right? here we goes..)
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!! The alarm clock rang, urgently reminding me that I, of course, was late.
" Crap!" I shouted, though no one would hear. My single dad was always on "buisness trips", spending no more than 2 days at home at a time. My Brother and Sister are away at college, therefore leaving me home alone to cope for myself. I looked at the clock. 8: 30. School starts at 8, and by time I get to school, first period will be over. " Crap Crap Crap." I rushed to get ready, picking up a random pair of jeans and T-shirt, not even bothering to looking the mirrior except to put my hair in a quick, messy bun. No breakfast, and car so cold it take at least five minutes to warm up and start.
Happy Birthday. I thought, finally on my way to school. I must cursed, because every birthday ends up in disaster, or being the worst day of the year.
The clouds hang low, and it starts pouring rain, the sound echoing off my windshield.
Great, weather to match my mood.
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11-22-2009 06:19 PM
((so then i write about another character?? okeydokey..haa i really shouldnt be on here right now.. should be writing my essay..ohh well..
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All it took was one look, and I was reduced to a puddle of mush. It sounds so rediculously corny, that it is something that you would find in a cheesy romance novel. But it was the truth. Calli just turned and looked at me. And that was all it took. She was wearing a peach colored blouse, and tight jeans, and her gossemer hair was tied in an elegant knot. Her emerald green eyes watched me, eagerly.
"Happy Birthday, Mitch..." She breathed. I was sure my heart stopped.
"H-ha.. tha...thank..." Fumbling on my words, I tried to hide, and my face turned a deep shade of red.
"Ohoo Mitch!" Calli's tinkling laugh fluttered across the room. She shot me a dashing smile. "There's something I really want to tell you..." My throat knotted.
"Uh.. oho erm..."
"Aw Mitch..." She smiled again, angelicly. "Happy Birthday..."
"Calli.. I..."
"Happy birthday..."
She leaned in closer this time. She was so close that I could faintly see her pulse beating through her top, and smell her perfume of fragrent flowers...
"Happy Birthday, Mitchel..."
"Calli..."
"Happy Birthday..."
"Oh ..."
Her perfect lips and beautiful smile. Calli grinned one last time, then leaned in and gently kissed my cheek.
"Calli..."
"Happy Birthday..."
Slowly, the image of Calli Masfiel, beautiful Calli Masfiel, began to fade... panicked, I cried out. "Calli! Wait! Noo.. please.."
"Happy Birthday..."
Something slimley and wet traced my waiting lips.
"Argh!" With a sharp thud, I tumbled off his bed, and onto the floor. "Oho what the-" Gazing up, I observed Andrew sitting on the bed. Andrew, my old golden retriever. Placing my hand gingerly to my face, I jumped back retching. Dog slobber. Lovely.
"Ugh you stupid dog," I grumbled. "Happy birthday to me..."
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11-22-2009 06:50 PM
ok well ill try...
I was startled awake by the sound of my phone blaring, causing me to roll over and land in a big heap on the floor. I jumped up and tried to find my phone, running my hands all over my bed. Finally i reached under my pillow and came out with phone hand. I fumbled as i tried to push the talk button. "Hello" i siad groggily into the phone.
"HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!" i flinched away from the phone and it slipped out of my hand falling to the floor. I bent slowly over slowly to retrieve it and brought it carefully up to my ear just in case of another outburst.
"Thanks." i spoke clearly since i was now fully awake.
"So old man i'm guessing you were still sleeping" a female voice said with a hint of amusement.
"You would guess correct" he said flopping onto the bed.
"Well sorry i woke you up."
"Don't worry about it." he said as his alarm clock went off "I was just about to get up anyway."
He heard a chuckle "Good. Well ill let you get ready for your big day. See you at school."
"Ok" he replied "See you then"
"I love you"
"love you to" then he clikced his phone off and jumped out of bed and headed for his bathroom. He started the shower and waited for the small room to fill with steam. Then he peeled of his clothes and stepped in.
And take this moment and make you my family
And finally you have found someone perfect
Finally you have found
~RHCP
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11-22-2009 07:34 PM
im warming up to this idea already ok so ill be the final girl becuase i was thinkin 3 girl and 2 boys seems dencent luna lmme know if u dont mind using a guy,ok i had no idea what was i wasgoing to do for my charcter so i just went with the flow one warning it might have some scences that you might find disturbing,
i was having them again the same nightmares over and over again, but these wernt your average nightmares nor your average dreams, they were real or at least had been at one point, somewhere... its always the same.. im standing in the middle of new york city, there is no middle but for some reason i know im right in the centre, my eyes are closed, my hands clentched tight at my sides, this is where my dream always ends only this time it continues
and then i see them, two girls and two boys standing beside each other, i recognise them but i dont, we all at that moment sense a kind of bond but then theres no time to contemplate suddenly it hits me the feeling is like nothing ive ever felt nor imagined, its as though my insides are being ripped abd teared apart, im burning but from the inside, im on my knees, the pain is so intense, that i know im ging to die, instinct kicks in as i scream in agony smoke eveaporating out of my body, i look around me, all around me people are in the same horrifing condition the screams are so loud if feels as though the planet earth itself is screaming they dont ever seem to stop, i search all around me anything that will result in me having a quick death anything than this, it seems like forever alot of people around us are dead its to late,
one scence will always stay with me, its a mother with a 3 year old girl shes snuggled the girl into her jacket in hope of protecting the child, i can only watch as the skin on the womens face excruciatingly start to burn and peel away but the most horific thing of all, is to witness the childs demise, the heat has burnt through the jacket its no use the loving hads that incase the child are dead, i can only watch as the child pleads for the safety of her mothers words, i try to crawl to the child
"its no use its over" with every inch of my strength i trun around it sone of the girls i saw shes on her knees as though shes fighting death itself, shes not in bad condition as everyone else infact the other girl and two boys arnt either yes there bodies maybe roasting but they are alive, i am alive and i cant se why death dosnt embrace me instead of feeling this pain feeling death itself yet not alowing me to be dead
"who are you" i ask coughing up blood
"we are the end" says the boy they seem to be finding comfort within each other
al of a sudden i remmeber the girl! a load cry escapes my moth, her clothes are burnt through her frail body lays besides her mothers, her litle arms held on time to her mother finding comfort even when death is near, im numb at this point i dont want to even know what i look lke the damage is so severe that i cant even feel the pain anymore, i look up to see the sky is a deep crimson, there is no life there is no nature, there is no sound i look back at the 4 indivituals that for some reason are still alive just like me, for a sec all our gazes meet a mutual inderstanding passes betwwen us all,
"we are the only ones left" says the other boy weakly the left side of hs face unrecognisable, but i dont dare say anything
and then everything starts to go blurry until only one person is before me shes saying something but i try to block it out until i have no choice but to listen, i feel her strength as she stands up and walks to the others, and then her eyes somehow see right through me
"save us save us all" she says her gaze pleaded giving me one last glipse of what is to be the world is no more my eyes open wide and i scream, i scream and scream i cant seem to stop
"Bianca bianca goodness sake whats happned" its my mother i see her but i cant hear her shes shaking me, but only the horror of what ive witnessed plays over.. and over like a tape unwilling to free me, just as soon as the images incase me im freed, im shakin uncontrolably, my minds numb, i panick and start to look at myslef, my arms, my neck, my hands, im not dying my skin isnt peling in excruciatingly pain, im safe, arnt i? i curl up in bed, and shut my eyes tight, mother thinks its just another one of my nightmares ive been ahving then since i was 6 but today it was different, today it continued, today i saw four other indivituals, there will be no school today, today my life weather i want to admit it or not has chnaged forever
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11-22-2009 09:11 PM
(ok! idea surfacing- what if the only person to have this 'vison' is that one character....Bianca is it? And she either 1) Must serch the others out to prevent it from being, or 2) they accidently keep running into each other, and when 2 of them actually sit down and talk, they realize part of whats going on, and go find the others? dunno)
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11-23-2009 12:48 PM
(can I make a request I wasn't able to post all weekend because of my internet was having issues. Could we make a 3rd boy? I wanted to make a character so bad, but I didn't have enough internet ram to post anything. We could make the 3rd boy unknown till the last few minutes. And maybe i could add him in now. And make him in like foreign country (aka france or some place) and he could be like the savor of them all or something. Idk. Its just i kindive want a character and not have to steal anyone else.)
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and sometimes they just stay still.
I turned to the clarinets. They were a resourceful lot.~Jennifer Echols, Major Crush
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11-23-2009 02:24 PM
ok ive thought this through because I want this to be fair and lets be honest seriously weve had many add ons and really who are the people who actually seem to add on Luna hasn’t been on for a while but it is mostly djaq, random,ky mg, and me who do the adding on so I think its fair enough that we for this add on choose the characters since I know well all be adding on regularly, this is very cool since normally each other us have our own different add ons where busy with but for once where all on the same add on
so sure mg, it seems like a really cool add on feel free to be the last boy
one thing about this add on I feel it should be quiet dark since the topic isn’t the most cheerfull one, although humor here and there is good we don’t want it being to depressing one other thing, we all have a tendency i.e. me
to make the love interest really obvious and introduced quickly, if there will be romance later on, lets not introduce it for a while and on the way also make sure its not obvious so that when the romances are introduced by then the characters are very developed and the readers don’t see it coming
, im very exited for this add, on, so since bianca has seen the vision it means at that moment each of the others have had it to, its your decision if u want to describe it in detail, although ive already described what happens so it might be dragging it along abit, truthfully I don’t want there to be one certain savior, if there is lets not decide till the end, because I can already feel each of us becoming attached to our charcters,and im sure the readers will have there own personal favorites so lets make there personalities shine and stand out, im not sure how they all meet, but for now lets take them through there day to day life, school family etc, describe what they look like, there personality just giving the reader the depth of our characters before we really get into the story
I
don’t mean to ramble on but I just want this add on to flow and not be rushed like most of them when we get exited have a tendency to do so, so girls!!! think on your character and lets start this kick ass story, mg I guess your next, make us proud ![]()
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