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09-01-2009 08:43 PM
And thank you for making an account just to comment on my poem....you have no idea how awesome that isss.
DD
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09-17-2009 01:56 PM
Cool poem i wrote one awhile ago tell me what you think.
The screams
The eyes
The lies
The crys
The false hope
The threatening ending
The blood
The pain
The emptiness
The lost child
The crushed soul
The darknessof silence
No one will listen
No one can see
No friends
No joy
No laughter
Only promises
Only pain No one
Sad eyes
Bruised skin
Hidden behind blindness
Look deeper
Look harder
What if it were you?
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01-16-2010 12:43 PM
Really Good !!! Nice Writing!!
Karl Theodor Jaspers
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02-26-2011 03:48 PM
Wow a great poem!! This is my old thread brought back to life for the day!
Mother Teresa
For it is in giving that we receive.
Francis of Assisi
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02-27-2011 04:57 PM
Wow this is a really well thought out beautiful poem!! I would really like to hear more from this user although I doubt they are on the boards anymore =( Well I hope they are still writing and creating!!
Abdul Kalam
"What great thing would you attempt if you knew you could not fail?"
Robert H. Schuller
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03-01-2011 09:47 PM
i like it![]()
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04-28-2012 02:46 PM
Loved it! I didn't want to stop reading it!!!
I love how you tell a story as the definition of a boy, then you come back to the definiton at the end and sum it up in simple words
fantastic!
~unknown
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05-03-2012 06:40 PM
What do you call it?
Taylor Swift