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lyssxxtwloha
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Registered: 02-22-2009
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Re: Eh...my poem...

And thank you for making an account just to comment on my poem....you have no idea how awesome that isss.  :smileyvery-happy:DD

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Notjustphysical
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Registered: 09-08-2009
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Cool poem i wrote one awhile ago tell me what you think.

 

The screams

The eyes

The lies

The crys

The false hope

The threatening ending

The blood

The pain

The emptiness

The lost child

The crushed soul

The darknessof silence

No one will listen

No one can see

No friends

No joy

No laughter

Only promises

Only pain No one

Sad eyes

Bruised skin

Hidden behind blindness

Look deeper

Look harder

What if it were you?

 

 

~Love is a poison~
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CharlieG31
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Registered: 01-06-2010
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Really Good !!! Nice Writing!!

"The questions are more essential than the answers."
Karl Theodor Jaspers

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HungerGamesPerson
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Wow a great poem!! This is my old thread brought back to life for the day!

If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other.
Mother Teresa
For it is in giving that we receive.
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ZoeyRedbird
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Registered: 06-23-2009
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Wow this is a really well thought out beautiful poem!! I would really like to hear more from this user although I doubt they are on the boards anymore =( Well I hope they are still writing and creating!!

"You have to dream before your dreams can come true."
Abdul Kalam
"What great thing would you attempt if you knew you could not fail?"
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Cheyenne_Catina
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i like it:smileyhappy:

"He is bound to you,” said the Queen. “But does he love you?"
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pupdog96
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Registered: 07-23-2009
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Loved it! I didn't want to stop reading it!!!

I love how you tell a story as the definition of a boy, then you come back to the definiton at the end and sum it up in simple words :smileyhappy: fantastic!

“Instead of wishing you were someone else, be proud of who you are. You never know who has been looking at you wishing they were you.”
~unknown
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Ewriter22
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What do you call it?

I know my flaws before other people point them out to me.
Taylor Swift