In Love

[YeLLoWmisT]

Hey guys, I need HONEST comments-- don't care if positive or negative, as long as it's honest.

"In Love"

Whenever I see him,

I can't stop smiling.

Whenever he talks to me,

I could feel my heart leap.

Whenever he smiles at me,

I thought I'll burst.

Whenever our eyes met,

I thought I'll melt.

I'm in love with this guy

and I don't know what to do.

Love is something you can't buy.

For me, love is really new.

It's a very lovely feeling

that can cause heart-breaking.

My mind went crazy.

I don't know what to do.

The more I see him,

the more I'm in love with him.

The more we talk and the more he smiles,

the more my heart leaps for miles.

He is the perfect guy.

I'l love him 'till I die.

I just hope that he loves me too;

'Cause if not, I dunno what I can do.

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So what do you think? 

[musicangirl]

I really like it. It kindive sounds like something I've wrote my self, but it was completely different. It reminds me of my own experiences.

[YeLLoWmisT]

Thanks Musicangril!

[AzazeL_bby]

super cute! i'm in that same situation now. Do you think i could possibly right it in my Book of Stuff? Of course credit will go to....yellowmist?? lol. only if it's okay with you.

“Well, you’ll have to wait til tomorrow. I’m out of commission.” (he points to his shirt) “Look. Jammies.”
-Jace

[YeLLoWmisT]

Wow, thanks Azazel! Sure you can! Thankyou!

[bLuec0wgurL09]

Yellowmist, I love it! My favorite part there is, " The more we talk and the more he smiles, the more my heart leaps for miles."  I'll rate it 5-star! LOL

[AzazeL_bby]

Awwww! Thanks! I write too but nothing like this. Lol. This is EXACTLY what I'm going thru. It just fits so perfectly...I....I...I just had to write it down! Thanks again!

“Well, you’ll have to wait til tomorrow. I’m out of commission.” (he points to his shirt) “Look. Jammies.”
-Jace