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AliceTP
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Love Is Blind (Litteraly)


Summary-

When sixteen year old Gina got a waitressing job she never thought she would be working with a blind boy.
With a house full of kids, a mom way in over her head, a dad with a drinking problem, and one scum bag of a boyfriend. She never in a million years thought that she would find comfort in the blind boy. The blind boy who she finds sturborn, annoying, at times jerkish, and so playing the victim card too much, well...lets just say what happens in small corners, closing hours, art sketches, fried chicken, and closed eyes, things are going to get heated.

(bad summary, good story!)


Tell me what u think. What to read?



















Sometimes i want to scream,
Other times i want to be happy,
Then i just want to be with you.
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djaq
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Re: Love Is Blind (Litteraly)

i think i would definately read it! is this something you are writing? it sounds really cool :smileyhappy:


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booklover37
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Re: Love Is Blind (Litteraly)

I agree! I would DEFINITELY read this! I really like your last sentence in the summary. If you rewrite the summary, keep that sentence. It makes your story sound interesting. So are you gonna start posting some of it on here? I think you should! :smileyhappy:

"...life is a fight just the same, whether you fight it with weapons, or with words. You have to fight for what you believe in, and for the things you want.'"
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musicangirl
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Re: Love Is Blind (Litteraly)

Alice that seems like a great story. :smileyhappy:

~Mg

Sometimes people give up,
other times they move on,
and sometimes they just stay still.

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sweetiepie95
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Re: Love Is Blind (Litteraly)

sounds really good

I'm weird cause i hate goodbyes :smileyhappy:
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_melissa
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Re: Love Is Blind (Literally)

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I have never read a book where the main character is so vulnerable, i am referring to the blind boy. I like it, it is different. I would love to read it, so let me know if you post anything.    

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random97
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Re: Love Is Blind (Literally)

YES YES YES!! I would DEFINETLY  read this! its different, please post!

"I've been making a list of the things they don't teach you at school. They don't teach you how to love somebody. They don't teach you how to be famous. They don't teach you how to be rich or how to be poor. They don't teach you how to walk away from someone you don't love any longer. They don't teach you how to know what's going on in someone else's mind. They don't teach you what to say to someone who's dying. They don't teach you anything worth knowing."