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YeLLoWmisT
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Registered: ‎10-15-2009
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Now that you're gone

Whew! This is my latest poem. :smileyvery-happy: Date written:smileysurprised:ct. 15, 2009

 

" Now that you're gone"

 

You are my happiness.

You are my world.

You're the air I breathe--

without you I can't live.

You are my light.

You make my world so right.

I know nothing 'till you came,

and behold, I'm not the same.

I realized I can't live without you.

Before, this thing I never knew.

You gave me the right door.

Wonder how I lived before?

You are my happiness.

You're the only one I love.

You took me out of sadness,

and once I felt I was loved.

But suddenly you left,

leaving me trapped in your net.

You said not a single word,

just leaving me in this dark world.

It's a vey lovely feeling--

to know that on someone I can depend.

It's a vet lovely feeling.

Why does it have to end?

And what can I do now?

Now that you're gone?

How to live? please tell me how.

'Cause without you, my life would be done.

What should I do?

Should I leave too?

But how can I leave?

I'm trapped and I'm too weak.

What should I seek?

Of the darkness, I'm so tired and sick.

Who will help me?

Who would set me free?

Who will show me the light?

And make my world bright?

All these questions was left unanswered.

Through all these, I guess I learned.

I learned not to trust everybody.

'Cause I could be deceived by anybody.

To whom shall I trust?

I don't know.

So I knelt to the dust,

'Cause I felt I was thrown.

 

Hey guys, check this out:

http://www.storywrite.com/
It's cool! :smileyvery-happy:
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djaq
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Registered: ‎02-28-2009
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Re: Now that you're gone

that. was.

 

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:smileyhappy: amazing job on your part! that was really great, and i love that so much!! :smileyvery-happy: that was amazing! fantastic job!!! :smileyvery-happy:


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YeLLoWmisT
Posts: 210
Registered: ‎10-15-2009
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Re: Now that you're gone

Thanks for replying, djaq! Very much appreciated.

Hey guys, check this out:

http://www.storywrite.com/
It's cool! :smileyvery-happy:
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sweetiepie95
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Registered: ‎11-23-2008
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Re: Now that you're gone

that was amazing!!!!

you r a excellent writer!!

i hope you put more your poems on here soon

I'm weird cause i hate goodbyes :smileyhappy: