02-13-2011 01:21 PM
hello! This is a new story im doing. I would like to know what YOU THINK about it.(:
Should I Write it? Well even if you don't think so, im going to anyway.
Because I learned not to let others control what you write.
So take a look a see!
My name is Ferrah Bandarie. Im seventeen and I ran away from my home when I was
fifteen years old. I didn't keep contact with my family. Just my friend Jessica Dell. And she just sent me a letter informing me my mother has passed away. So now after 2 years of staying away, im going back to that small town, in Montana. Facing my father, sibling, friends, and enemys, about why I ran away in the first place. Not to mention seeing Derek again.
Can she make everything right again?
Or will she just run away for the next years to come?
And can she find love, in this whole mess of heartbroken tragedy?
By the way my old user name was ALICETP, so if you were on when I was a long time ago, you know who I am. & I hope your doing good. Hope to see you on here again! (:
02-13-2011 01:40 PM - edited 02-13-2011 01:41 PM
It sounds good.
( I'm the Only one on teen reads right now)
I am soooo lonely........
For it is in giving that we receive.
Francis of Assisi
02-13-2011 03:01 PM
I think I might just remember you!! =) So I think your idea for your story looks pretty good! Although it's kinda hard to tell from that much information, but it's caught my attention! You should write more of it! I would like to hear lots more =) And good for you that you don't allow others to control what you write!
"What great thing would you attempt if you knew you could not fail?"
Robert H. Schuller
02-21-2011 02:48 AM
go for it... sounds like a good read...