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Luna93
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Re: want to start an add-on

yeah it was good. ok how bout this?...

 

I just lay there trying to figure out how bad my injuries where. I heard someone yelling from a distance, but i didn't move i just laid there.

After a couple of minutes my eyes fluttered open and Daniel was standing right over my with a worried expression on his face. I let out a little scream and then he was gone and someone else was coming into my line of vision. It was a boy who seemed to be about my age and he looked scared.

"Are you okay?" he asked with an ounce of hysteria in his voice.

"Yeah. i'm fine." i told him while i tried to push my self up into a sitting position. I felt fine just a little light headed. I looked down at my self. The was a rip in my jeans at the knees and my arms had some gashes on them, but other than that i was fine.

"Your head." he said

"What?" i asid while reaching up and feeling a warm moisture there. "Oh" i breathed. when i brought my hand back down it had a spot of red on it.

"Here let my take you to the hospital." he said while trying to help me up.

"No its probaly not as bad as it looks. i'll just go home and clean up." Man i was gonna  be so late for school.

"At least let me gice you a ride home."

"No really its fine i have my bike anyway."

"I'm sure it can fit in my car." he went to pick up the bike and put it in his trunk. Well i couldn't object know. So i started for the passengers door and got in.

All I want is for you to be happy
And take this moment and make you my family
And finally you have found someone perfect
Finally you have found
~RHCP
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Silvermist24
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Re: want to start an add-on

I really liked it Luna.I would add-on but I can't stay on that long.
Baby you can drive my car,
Yes I'm gonna be a star,
Baby you can drive my car,
And Baby I love you,
Beep Beep, Beep Beep, Yea!
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Luna93
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Re: want to start an add-on

Thanks i'm glad u liked it. :smileyhappy:
All I want is for you to be happy
And take this moment and make you my family
And finally you have found someone perfect
Finally you have found
~RHCP
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Silvermist24
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Re: want to start an add-on

You're welcome:smileyvery-happy:
Baby you can drive my car,
Yes I'm gonna be a star,
Baby you can drive my car,
And Baby I love you,
Beep Beep, Beep Beep, Yea!
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Silvermist24
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Re: want to start an add-on

OK, here it is.

 

The boy was really talkative. He blabbed on and on about something that I didn't pay attention to. I was thinking about Daniel. Again.

   I thought about how he just disapered. That wasn't possible, why did that happen? He wasn't real. He just couldn't be. i was just imagining him, it had to be that. I was lonely. That was all.

   Why did I go so fast, so fast that I couldn't even see the car coming until it was too late?

   "What are you thinking about?" A chill went up my spine, it was Daniel's cold voice. Oh no.

   "Nothing," I replied stupidly.

   "What?" asked the boy, not seeing Daniel right behing me, in the back. Just like Mom didn't.

   Daniel chuckled in a his cold, lifeless way. But there was something new to it. There was emotion to it.

   The boy continued to stare at me as if he thought I was razy. his sandy blond hair ruffled from the breeze coming from the open window. but I didn't care.

   I looked back suddenly. Daniel wasn't there any longer. I almost wished he was. Or maybe I did.

 

I got more:smileyhappy: I like this story so far:smileyvery-happy:

 

 

Baby you can drive my car,
Yes I'm gonna be a star,
Baby you can drive my car,
And Baby I love you,
Beep Beep, Beep Beep, Yea!
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Luna93
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Re: want to start an add-on

Yeah me too. that was good. :smileyhappy:
All I want is for you to be happy
And take this moment and make you my family
And finally you have found someone perfect
Finally you have found
~RHCP
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booklover37
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Re: want to start an add-on

i like this story too!! :smileyhappy: are you gonna add more?

"...life is a fight just the same, whether you fight it with weapons, or with words. You have to fight for what you believe in, and for the things you want.'"
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Silvermist24
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Re: want to start an add-on

Am I gonna add more? Do you want me to?
Baby you can drive my car,
Yes I'm gonna be a star,
Baby you can drive my car,
And Baby I love you,
Beep Beep, Beep Beep, Yea!
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Luna93
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Re: want to start an add-on

Yeah u should write some more. i would but my brains a little fried right now. plus i gotta get to bed. night. ttyl. :smileyhappy:
All I want is for you to be happy
And take this moment and make you my family
And finally you have found someone perfect
Finally you have found
~RHCP
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booklover37
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Re: want to start an add-on

silvermist: if you have want to, you should add on! & then i'll go after you
"...life is a fight just the same, whether you fight it with weapons, or with words. You have to fight for what you believe in, and for the things you want.'"
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Silvermist24
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Re: want to start an add-on

OK if you want...

 

I climbed out of the car the instant it stopped. the boy my age looked a little offended. i didn't care.

   In fact, I didn't care about anything. Exept for Daniel. I was going to firgure himout, what he was. Yeah what he was. He wasn't human, I was smart enough to know that.

---

"Are you OK?" my only friend, Susan, shot at me right when she saw me. Of course the news spread around school, great. i didn't want people gossiping about me!

   "Yes," I half-groaned. She hugged me.

   "You looke horrible though!" she put a careful hand on my forehead.

   "Thanks so much," i muttered sarcastically. She glared at me.

   Susan took my arm and pulled me towards our first class. I didn't want to go of course.

---

I didn't listen at all in class. It was boring enough. Instead i keep on seeing Daniel. I must have been past obsession a long time ago. I leaned forward and rested my chin on my hand.

   "Hello," said a voice right beside me. OIf course by now you could figure out who it was.

 

Was it good?

Baby you can drive my car,
Yes I'm gonna be a star,
Baby you can drive my car,
And Baby I love you,
Beep Beep, Beep Beep, Yea!
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_K3LS3Y_
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Re: want to start an add-on

[ Edited ]
never mind we added at the same time
Message Edited by _K3LS3Y_ on 04-19-2009 10:41 PM
You always get your happy ending
If you're not happy...then it's not the end
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Silvermist24
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Re: want to start an add-on

Oh, sry. What did you add?
Baby you can drive my car,
Yes I'm gonna be a star,
Baby you can drive my car,
And Baby I love you,
Beep Beep, Beep Beep, Yea!
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_K3LS3Y_
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Re: want to start an add-on

it's ohk i forgot haha.:smileyhappy: but instead she went to the hospital. but it's ohk
You always get your happy ending
If you're not happy...then it's not the end
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booklover37
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Re: want to start an add-on

okay, here it is...

 

 

I turned my head around slowly to see Daniel sitting in the seat behind me.

My stomach flipped but I remembered to keep quiet this time.

"How can you stand this?" Daniel whispered and looked around the room. "All the gossip about you."

I just stared at him. He grinned. "You like the attention, don't you?"

I did not like the attention. I hated all the gossip around me, just because of one little accident. But no one would shut up. And it's not like I could answer Daniel. People would think I was crazy, talking to myself.

So instead I turned around and faced the front of the room.

The classes went by in a blur. Daniel had trailed after me the whole day, making witty comments about everything. Finally, the last bell rang and I headed to my locker.

I rounded the corner and saw a boy standing in front of my locker. It was the kid from the accident.

"Hey," he smiled sheepishly. "You feeling okay?"

I nodded and shoved books quickly into my locker.

"OOOO, someone's a bit angry," taunted Daniel right beside me.

"So, do you need a ride home?" the boy asked.

"Yes, do you need a ride home?" repeated Daniel.

I could feel the anger build up inside of me. Why couldn't anyone else see him?! Was I going crazy? Or was it all in my head? And he won't shut up!

"Look," I whirled around and faced the boy. "It was a small accident, okay? I feel perfectly fine and I don't need your help."

The boy looked offended but shrugged and walked off.

"I think he likes you," Daniel whispered in my ear. I felt the cold air reach my cheeks and I shivered.

I grabbed a piece of paper from my notebook and wrote

GO AWAY.

Daniel peeked over me and read it.. He snickered.

"It's fun haunting people." And he disappeared.

Haunting people?

Was Daniel.... a, a ghost??

"...life is a fight just the same, whether you fight it with weapons, or with words. You have to fight for what you believe in, and for the things you want.'"
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Silvermist24
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Re: want to start an add-on

I loved it!

 

I stood there for a minute, very dumbly. What? Wait, what? Of course, i should have expected something supernatueral like that but, what?

   No, just, no. It can't be. He was just part of my imagination. He just had to be.

   But he wasn't. He was real. He just had to be.

   Wait, what?

   I found myself actually fainting. I never fainted. But I did now. Why me? Why me?! Why me?!!

   My vision was as blurred as my thoughts. I didn't even know what I was thinking. I was crazy, I had to be.

 

It's a little wierd and i guess morbi but, o well.

Hey, there's this website I could post it on, i have an account on it. Would it be ok with you guys if I posted it there? And would it be under the romance gerne as well as supernateral?

Baby you can drive my car,
Yes I'm gonna be a star,
Baby you can drive my car,
And Baby I love you,
Beep Beep, Beep Beep, Yea!
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Silvermist24
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Re: want to start an add-on

Is anybody going to add-on? if not, I will.
Baby you can drive my car,
Yes I'm gonna be a star,
Baby you can drive my car,
And Baby I love you,
Beep Beep, Beep Beep, Yea!
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blackmiss
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Re: want to start an add-on

i'm going to
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blackmiss
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Re: want to start an add-on

no scratch that. i have to go and eat

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_K3LS3Y_
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Re: want to start an add-on

go on silvermist
You always get your happy ending
If you're not happy...then it's not the end