lady_hockey - Punctuation - Writing Exercise

[lady_hockey]

Kevin is a professional hockey player who is currently on IR (injured reserve) and going a little stir crazy. He was recently traded from the only team he's ever been on and had to pick up, move to a new city and start all over again. He has decided to make the best of it and bought himself an old house that he's going to fix up. While looking around, he discovers a box of old papers, probably from the first owners of the house, though after he reads them they disapper, leading him to wonder if he's really lost his mind.

(Just something quick, I think my punctuation is pretty good, but I'll take suggestions from any angle.)

[lavenderlass]

It looks okay to me, but I'm the worst person to ask, I knew nothing until I read Jenny's book on grammar and still find it very easy to read what I think I read, not what I actually read if you see what I mean.

Lynne.