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Ian
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Ian
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Ian's Visual Storytelling -- Writing Exercise

The full length mirror reflects an average-sized white guy with mid-length, too-black hair. He strikes a body-builder pose, grunting and gritting his teeth. His image barely changes.

He reaches to his left and grabs a pair of white sport socks, holds them up as if examining them for something only he knows might be there, then with a grin, he stuffs them down the front of his tight black, satin pants. He turns left and right to examine his new bulge in the mirror.

He grabs a soft pink, silk shirt and slips it on. He buttons it up half way and pulls up the collar Elvis-style, then he strikes a few poses in the mirror. After a quick check of his watch, the guy struggles to put on a pair of black, pointy-toed shoes, then grabs his keys and opens the door.

He bends down to adjust a pant-leg revealing a gaping, white hole in the ass of his black pants. He slams the door closed.
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Brendan_M_Burns
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Re: Ian's Visual Storytelling -- Writing Exercise

Ian,

Great visuals! The bulge, the gaping hole in the pants -- and particularly the pink shirt. For me, that was the cherry on top.
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TrayseaWrites
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Re: Ian's Visual Storytelling -- Writing Exercise

Awesome! I would love to see how this unfolds.
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NEM
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Re: Ian's Visual Storytelling -- Writing Exercise

Nice, but short -- I liked the touch of humor.
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