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crAZRick's crazy fan-fics: #2 Halloween 7.5
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04-14-2007 04:16 PM
I wrote this a few years ago, after Halloween: H20 came out on DVD. H20 seemed to offer a fitting end to the Michael Myers saga, most fans said 'So what if this was National Lampoon's Halloween Vacation in California... OK, Michael got a grand send-off, Laurie got her paybacks, so what if H20 ignored Halloween 3 thru 6... Donald Pleasence is gone, no more Loomis = no more Michael Myers...'
Michael Myers' 'grand send-off'?? No more Loomis = no more Michael Myers??
So what if H20 ignored half of the series?
So what?!?!
I could write a Halloween sequel that doesn't ignore half the series and in fact reintroduces some beloved characters from those middle chapters, introduces a Loomis-essence foil, gives Michael Myers center stage again, allows him to get payback in revenge for Laurie's gruesome payback, and brings it all back home, back to Haddonfield, where any decent Halloween movie belongs!!
so I did.
Remember: I wrote this after H20, and before Resurrection was conceived, though some few certain similarities do develop between my vision and what showed up in Resurrection (noteably the 'coming home' aspect); and I did tack on a Resurrection-lead-in ending after that film hit DVD so it can still fit between H20 and Resurrection (hence the 7.5 title), but the bulk of this screenplay was in the can long before Resurrection hit theaters...
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Halloween. This is a fan-fic using and/or referencing characters and stories created by John Carpenter, Debra Hill, Tommy Lee Wallace, Dhani Lipsius, Larry Rattner, Benjamin Ruffner, Alan B. McElroy, Michael Jacobs, Dominique Othenin-Gerard, Shem Bitterman, Daniel Farrands, Robert Zappia and Matt Greenberg.
Read at your own risk; it's most likely crap, and very scary Halloween crap!
Michael Myers' 'grand send-off'?? No more Loomis = no more Michael Myers??
So what if H20 ignored half of the series?
So what?!?!
I could write a Halloween sequel that doesn't ignore half the series and in fact reintroduces some beloved characters from those middle chapters, introduces a Loomis-essence foil, gives Michael Myers center stage again, allows him to get payback in revenge for Laurie's gruesome payback, and brings it all back home, back to Haddonfield, where any decent Halloween movie belongs!!
so I did.
Remember: I wrote this after H20, and before Resurrection was conceived, though some few certain similarities do develop between my vision and what showed up in Resurrection (noteably the 'coming home' aspect); and I did tack on a Resurrection-lead-in ending after that film hit DVD so it can still fit between H20 and Resurrection (hence the 7.5 title), but the bulk of this screenplay was in the can long before Resurrection hit theaters...
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Halloween. This is a fan-fic using and/or referencing characters and stories created by John Carpenter, Debra Hill, Tommy Lee Wallace, Dhani Lipsius, Larry Rattner, Benjamin Ruffner, Alan B. McElroy, Michael Jacobs, Dominique Othenin-Gerard, Shem Bitterman, Daniel Farrands, Robert Zappia and Matt Greenberg.
Read at your own risk; it's most likely crap, and very scary Halloween crap!
I no longer regret that I have no quote, quip or anecdote to share with my countrymen... how about all y'all?
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04-14-2007 04:17 PM
HALLOWEEN: THE LEGACY OF MICHAEL MYERS
EXT. MYERS HOUSE- NIGHT
MARKER: HALLOWEEN, 1963
6-year old MICHAEL MYERS stands outside the house in clown costume, holding a still-bloody butcher knife as his parents arrive home. DENNIS and CAROL MYERS discover the body of their 17-year old daughter, JUDITH, in her bedroom, slashed and stabbed to death.
VOICE OVER
(subdued)
There is a legend surrounding the night of Halloween… A legend born one night in 1963, in a small town in Central Illinois, A legend born in the curse of a young child, A child who cannot die…
EXT. STRODE HOUSE- NIGHT
MARKER: HALLOWEEN, 1978
6 gun-shots ring out from inside the house.
A body, that of MICHAEL MYERS, age 21, falls from second-story balcony, landing with a muffled THUD on the ground below.
STRODE HOUSE- SECOND STORY WINDOW
The shooter, DR SAM LOOMIS, appears in the second-story window, looking down to where MICHAEL had fallen only moments ago
LOOMIS POV
The body of MICHAEL MYERS is mysteriously missing!
VOICE OVER
The child, grown into a man… The legend grown into a legacy.
The child who cannot die, grown into a man who can never truly live.
A man who cannot live unless he rids the world of his remaining bloodline...
DISSOLVE TO:
PEACEFUL PLEASENCE CEMETERY, HADDONFIELD- DAY
grave-sites in a row, a family plot
PAN ACROSS GRAVE MARKERS:
DENNIS MYERS-
BELOVED FATHER AND HUSBAND
CAROL MYERS-
LOVING WIFE, MOTHER
FADE IN:
INSERT: NEWSPAPER CLIPPING:
DENNIS AND CAROL MYERS KILLED IN CAR ACCIDENT
V.O.
MOTHER AND FATHER…
FADE OUT TO CEMETERY:
CONTINUE PANNING ACROSS MARKERS
JUDITH MYERS- 1947-1963
Images of 6-year old Michael Myers, stabbing Judith Myers to death Newspaper clipping, picture of Laurie Strode:
HADDONFIELD TEEN STALKED BY OLDER BROTHER
V.O.
SISTERS…
FADE OUT TO CEMETERY:
CONTINUE PAN ACROSS PLOT MARKERS
JAMIE LLOYD
Images of Jamie Lloyd being stalked, and finally killed by MICHAEL MYERS
Images of John Tate and Molly being stalked and slashed at through barred gate outside dorm room
V.O.
NIECES AND NEPHEWS…
FADE OUT TO CEMETERY:
CONTINUOUS PAN ACROSS GRAVE MARKERS, INTER-CUT WITH SCENES OF FAMILIAR DEATHS
JOHN STRODE'S head exploding, body burning in basement
DEBRA STRODE chopped in the head with a large axe
RACHEL CORRUTHERS slashed in the chest by a large kitchen knife
V.O.
Even aunts, uncles, and cousins… Unrelenting, unstoppable.. Evil, pure Evil..
VARIOUS OTHER RANDOM KILLS, alternating with images of §DR LOOMIS chasing, hunting, shooting, and finally beating MICHAEL with a steel pipe
V.O.
The Evil inside him cannot be stopped, Cannot be killed… Can never die…
STOP PAN ACROSS MARKERS, SETTLE ON MARKER FAR ACROSS CEMETERY
DR SAMUEL LOOMIS 1927-1995 § §V.O.
This is his curse, his legacy, To seek out and destroy all who bear his family name.
EXT. NON-DESCRIPT VICTORIAN-STYLE HOUSE- NIGHT
House is surrounded by massive stone wall
MARKER: SMITH'S GROVE, 1344 SHADY HILL WAY
OCTOBER 30,1995
Lightning flashes, thunder rolls in the distance this night
SLOW APPROACH on exterior of home § §Suddenly, and UNIDENTIFIED WOMAN plunges from a second-story window, landing with a heavy THUD on the ground below
V.O.
..destroy them all, Or drive them to destroy themselves..
PAN UP from ground level, away from home, toward the street, to MAILBOX
MAILBOX READS: 'Dennis and Carol Reese'
V.O.
This is the legend of the spirit of Halloween, This is the Legacy of Michael Myers!
THUNDER CLAP AND LIGHTNING FLASH
FADE TO BLACK
SOUNDS OF RITUALISTIC CHANTS continue
FADE FROM BLACK
MARKER: HALLOWEEN, 1998
EXT. REESE RESIDENCE, SMITH'S GROVE- NIGHT
NOTE: The Reese mailbox is no longer present outside the stone fences surrounding the compound. In its place, now stands a stone pillar, topped with a runic symbol in brass, the symbol of Thorn
RITUALISTIC CHANTS CONTINUE
INT. THORN CULT COMPOUND- NIGHT
Cult members in dark robes, chant and move around Symbol of Thorn engraved in stone tablet on the floor in the center of the room.
ONE FIGURE looms over all the others, performing hand gestures and vocalizing incantations above and beyond the FOLLOWERS chants
EFFECTS SHOT: Swirling sparkles of light and mystical energy flow around the SYMBOL OF THORN on the tablet on the floor Suddenly, there is a brilliant flare to the energy surrounding the tablet, then SILENCE and the lights fade abruptly
INITIATE 1
(confused)
What? What happened?
INITIATE 2
Something has happened… Master?
(a beat)
Lord Wynn?
PAN TO AND FOLLOW HOODED FIGURE circling group of cultist enchanters § §The hooded LEADER stops at the top of the circle of INITIATES, lowering his hood, revealing: DR TERRENCE WYNN
WYNN
(distressed)
Oh my… We've lost him!
HILL CREST PRIVATE ACADEMY, CALIFORNIA- NIGHT
A medical evacuation transport van careens from the road, crashing through the barricade and rumbling down a steep slope into the ditch. A dark, masked figure, MICHAEL MYERS, is clinging to the front grill of the van, as the van crashes into a large tree.
KERI TATE staggers from the smoking van, holding a large fireman's axe.
MICHAEL MYERS rouses slowly, discovering that he is pinned between the van and the tree trunk. MICHAEL's hands flail wildly at the mask for a moment, before he sets his gaze upon KERI.
A confused, plaintiff gaze from MICHAEL to KERI
MICHAEL reaches his hand out toward KERI
KERI steps forward apprehensively, then steps back and turns away
(a long beat)
KERI spins on her heel, raising the axe with determined zeal
SOUND OF AXE, SEVERING FLESH AND BONE, AND LODGING IN TREE TRUNK VIEW FROM BEHIND TREE, OFFSET TO FOCUS ON KERI TATE
MICHAEL MYERS' head falls to one side, rolling free from his body § §KERI drops the axe and stumbles backwards, sobbing, relieved § §KERI collapses to her knees, panting, sobbing, wiping tears
SHIFT FOCUS: BEHIND KERI AWAY FROM SCENE NEAR VAN TO STEEPLY-SLOPING DITCH
PARAMEDIC approaches silently, marching methodically into scene
As PARAMEDIC approaches KERI, FOCUS on PARAMEDIC's torso, from chest to waist, catching glimpse of burned, scarred, tattooed hand
KERI SENSES SOMEONE APPROACHING, AND ATTEMPTS TO RECOVER AND STAND
Garbled sigh-scream as KERI is lifted forcibly from the ground, from behind, her head in the vice-like grip of the burned, scarred hands
FOCUS ON PARAMEDIC UNIFORMED ARMS AND CHEST
PAN AROUND SCENE, CENTERED ON KERI
PARAMEDIC crushing KERI TATE's skull between his hands
PARAMEDIC drops KERI to her knees, and grips her head in his hands, twisting her head sharply from side to side
KERI goes limp in PARAMEDIC's grasp
PARAMEDIC drops KERI's dead weight to the ground
PAN FROM PARAMEDIC TO BASE OF TREE
FOCUS ON SEVERED HEAD, in mask, near quivering body, still pinned to tree by van
PARAMEDIC steps forward, leaning, removing mask from severed head
FOCUS ON HEAD, centered on piercing blue eyes
ZOOM SLOWLY IN ON BLUE EYES
ZOOM SLOWLY OUT AWAY FROM BLUE EYES TO:
FLASHBACK: HILL CREST ACADEMY SCHOOL GROUNDS PROPER
3 gurneys loaded into 3 transport vans
BLUE EYES and other PARAMEDICS manage the scene
BLUE EYES
Is that the last of 'em?
PARAMEDIC #2
(shaking head)
Uhh, there's one more, in there… BLUE EYES wipes blood from his gloved hands with handkerchief, wadding handkerchief and stuffing it in his pocket, before moving toward building
BLUE EYES
I got this one.
You guys get ready to move out.
This is a damn nightmare!
PARAMEDIC #2
(laughing)
Yeah!
Happy Halloween!!
BLUE EYES exits scene, into building, while other PARAMEDICS finish loading vans
Crash-site, centered on severed head of BLUE EYES behind MASK
NOTE: BLUE EYE'S mouth stuffed with BLOODY HANDKERCHIEF
PAN FROM SEVERED HEAD, UP PARAMEDIC'S BODY, AS PARAMEDIC RISES, AND DONS THE WHITE-FACED MASK
MUSIC: ORIGINAL HALLOWEEN THEME, SLOW AND SUBDUED
EXT. MYERS HOUSE- NIGHT
MARKER: HALLOWEEN, 1963
6-year old MICHAEL MYERS stands outside the house in clown costume, holding a still-bloody butcher knife as his parents arrive home. DENNIS and CAROL MYERS discover the body of their 17-year old daughter, JUDITH, in her bedroom, slashed and stabbed to death.
VOICE OVER
(subdued)
There is a legend surrounding the night of Halloween… A legend born one night in 1963, in a small town in Central Illinois, A legend born in the curse of a young child, A child who cannot die…
EXT. STRODE HOUSE- NIGHT
MARKER: HALLOWEEN, 1978
6 gun-shots ring out from inside the house.
A body, that of MICHAEL MYERS, age 21, falls from second-story balcony, landing with a muffled THUD on the ground below.
STRODE HOUSE- SECOND STORY WINDOW
The shooter, DR SAM LOOMIS, appears in the second-story window, looking down to where MICHAEL had fallen only moments ago
LOOMIS POV
The body of MICHAEL MYERS is mysteriously missing!
VOICE OVER
The child, grown into a man… The legend grown into a legacy.
The child who cannot die, grown into a man who can never truly live.
A man who cannot live unless he rids the world of his remaining bloodline...
DISSOLVE TO:
PEACEFUL PLEASENCE CEMETERY, HADDONFIELD- DAY
grave-sites in a row, a family plot
PAN ACROSS GRAVE MARKERS:
DENNIS MYERS-
BELOVED FATHER AND HUSBAND
CAROL MYERS-
LOVING WIFE, MOTHER
FADE IN:
INSERT: NEWSPAPER CLIPPING:
DENNIS AND CAROL MYERS KILLED IN CAR ACCIDENT
V.O.
MOTHER AND FATHER…
FADE OUT TO CEMETERY:
CONTINUE PANNING ACROSS MARKERS
JUDITH MYERS- 1947-1963
Images of 6-year old Michael Myers, stabbing Judith Myers to death Newspaper clipping, picture of Laurie Strode:
HADDONFIELD TEEN STALKED BY OLDER BROTHER
V.O.
SISTERS…
FADE OUT TO CEMETERY:
CONTINUE PAN ACROSS PLOT MARKERS
JAMIE LLOYD
Images of Jamie Lloyd being stalked, and finally killed by MICHAEL MYERS
Images of John Tate and Molly being stalked and slashed at through barred gate outside dorm room
V.O.
NIECES AND NEPHEWS…
FADE OUT TO CEMETERY:
CONTINUOUS PAN ACROSS GRAVE MARKERS, INTER-CUT WITH SCENES OF FAMILIAR DEATHS
JOHN STRODE'S head exploding, body burning in basement
DEBRA STRODE chopped in the head with a large axe
RACHEL CORRUTHERS slashed in the chest by a large kitchen knife
V.O.
Even aunts, uncles, and cousins… Unrelenting, unstoppable.. Evil, pure Evil..
VARIOUS OTHER RANDOM KILLS, alternating with images of §DR LOOMIS chasing, hunting, shooting, and finally beating MICHAEL with a steel pipe
V.O.
The Evil inside him cannot be stopped, Cannot be killed… Can never die…
STOP PAN ACROSS MARKERS, SETTLE ON MARKER FAR ACROSS CEMETERY
DR SAMUEL LOOMIS 1927-1995 § §V.O.
This is his curse, his legacy, To seek out and destroy all who bear his family name.
EXT. NON-DESCRIPT VICTORIAN-STYLE HOUSE- NIGHT
House is surrounded by massive stone wall
MARKER: SMITH'S GROVE, 1344 SHADY HILL WAY
OCTOBER 30,1995
Lightning flashes, thunder rolls in the distance this night
SLOW APPROACH on exterior of home § §Suddenly, and UNIDENTIFIED WOMAN plunges from a second-story window, landing with a heavy THUD on the ground below
V.O.
..destroy them all, Or drive them to destroy themselves..
PAN UP from ground level, away from home, toward the street, to MAILBOX
MAILBOX READS: 'Dennis and Carol Reese'
V.O.
This is the legend of the spirit of Halloween, This is the Legacy of Michael Myers!
THUNDER CLAP AND LIGHTNING FLASH
FADE TO BLACK
SOUNDS OF RITUALISTIC CHANTS continue
FADE FROM BLACK
MARKER: HALLOWEEN, 1998
EXT. REESE RESIDENCE, SMITH'S GROVE- NIGHT
NOTE: The Reese mailbox is no longer present outside the stone fences surrounding the compound. In its place, now stands a stone pillar, topped with a runic symbol in brass, the symbol of Thorn
RITUALISTIC CHANTS CONTINUE
INT. THORN CULT COMPOUND- NIGHT
Cult members in dark robes, chant and move around Symbol of Thorn engraved in stone tablet on the floor in the center of the room.
ONE FIGURE looms over all the others, performing hand gestures and vocalizing incantations above and beyond the FOLLOWERS chants
EFFECTS SHOT: Swirling sparkles of light and mystical energy flow around the SYMBOL OF THORN on the tablet on the floor Suddenly, there is a brilliant flare to the energy surrounding the tablet, then SILENCE and the lights fade abruptly
INITIATE 1
(confused)
What? What happened?
INITIATE 2
Something has happened… Master?
(a beat)
Lord Wynn?
PAN TO AND FOLLOW HOODED FIGURE circling group of cultist enchanters § §The hooded LEADER stops at the top of the circle of INITIATES, lowering his hood, revealing: DR TERRENCE WYNN
WYNN
(distressed)
Oh my… We've lost him!
HILL CREST PRIVATE ACADEMY, CALIFORNIA- NIGHT
A medical evacuation transport van careens from the road, crashing through the barricade and rumbling down a steep slope into the ditch. A dark, masked figure, MICHAEL MYERS, is clinging to the front grill of the van, as the van crashes into a large tree.
KERI TATE staggers from the smoking van, holding a large fireman's axe.
MICHAEL MYERS rouses slowly, discovering that he is pinned between the van and the tree trunk. MICHAEL's hands flail wildly at the mask for a moment, before he sets his gaze upon KERI.
A confused, plaintiff gaze from MICHAEL to KERI
MICHAEL reaches his hand out toward KERI
KERI steps forward apprehensively, then steps back and turns away
(a long beat)
KERI spins on her heel, raising the axe with determined zeal
SOUND OF AXE, SEVERING FLESH AND BONE, AND LODGING IN TREE TRUNK VIEW FROM BEHIND TREE, OFFSET TO FOCUS ON KERI TATE
MICHAEL MYERS' head falls to one side, rolling free from his body § §KERI drops the axe and stumbles backwards, sobbing, relieved § §KERI collapses to her knees, panting, sobbing, wiping tears
SHIFT FOCUS: BEHIND KERI AWAY FROM SCENE NEAR VAN TO STEEPLY-SLOPING DITCH
PARAMEDIC approaches silently, marching methodically into scene
As PARAMEDIC approaches KERI, FOCUS on PARAMEDIC's torso, from chest to waist, catching glimpse of burned, scarred, tattooed hand
KERI SENSES SOMEONE APPROACHING, AND ATTEMPTS TO RECOVER AND STAND
Garbled sigh-scream as KERI is lifted forcibly from the ground, from behind, her head in the vice-like grip of the burned, scarred hands
FOCUS ON PARAMEDIC UNIFORMED ARMS AND CHEST
PAN AROUND SCENE, CENTERED ON KERI
PARAMEDIC crushing KERI TATE's skull between his hands
PARAMEDIC drops KERI to her knees, and grips her head in his hands, twisting her head sharply from side to side
KERI goes limp in PARAMEDIC's grasp
PARAMEDIC drops KERI's dead weight to the ground
PAN FROM PARAMEDIC TO BASE OF TREE
FOCUS ON SEVERED HEAD, in mask, near quivering body, still pinned to tree by van
PARAMEDIC steps forward, leaning, removing mask from severed head
FOCUS ON HEAD, centered on piercing blue eyes
ZOOM SLOWLY IN ON BLUE EYES
ZOOM SLOWLY OUT AWAY FROM BLUE EYES TO:
FLASHBACK: HILL CREST ACADEMY SCHOOL GROUNDS PROPER
3 gurneys loaded into 3 transport vans
BLUE EYES and other PARAMEDICS manage the scene
BLUE EYES
Is that the last of 'em?
PARAMEDIC #2
(shaking head)
Uhh, there's one more, in there… BLUE EYES wipes blood from his gloved hands with handkerchief, wadding handkerchief and stuffing it in his pocket, before moving toward building
BLUE EYES
I got this one.
You guys get ready to move out.
This is a damn nightmare!
PARAMEDIC #2
(laughing)
Yeah!
Happy Halloween!!
BLUE EYES exits scene, into building, while other PARAMEDICS finish loading vans
Crash-site, centered on severed head of BLUE EYES behind MASK
NOTE: BLUE EYE'S mouth stuffed with BLOODY HANDKERCHIEF
PAN FROM SEVERED HEAD, UP PARAMEDIC'S BODY, AS PARAMEDIC RISES, AND DONS THE WHITE-FACED MASK
MUSIC: ORIGINAL HALLOWEEN THEME, SLOW AND SUBDUED
I no longer regret that I have no quote, quip or anecdote to share with my countrymen... how about all y'all?