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Fever (Poem)

My life,
Is getting crazier by the second,
Everybody needing everything,
And all at once,
I'm so frustrated,
I can't even think straight,
Not having the slightest clue,
What I should do next,
All I really want to do is,
Is just sleep,
My head is spinning,
My body is shaking,
I can't eat anything,
Massive headaches are taking over my entire self,
Could it be what I thought it was,
No,
It's only a tiny fever!

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tiffany57
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Re: Fever (Poem)

At first I was thinking- Hey, lots of people go though this.  then I kept reading and I wondered how the title fever came into play.  I reread the ending, I like it.  It's funny because your charecter thinks that she or je is all depressed then they remember tyhat it is just a fever.  I like it.

If there is a book you really want to read but it hasn't been written yet, you must write it. -Toni Morrison
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Re: Fever (Poem)

hey thanks!

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tiffany57
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Yep...No problem!

If there is a book you really want to read but it hasn't been written yet, you must write it. -Toni Morrison