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Fever (Poem)
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02-06-2010 01:20 PM
My life,
Is getting crazier by the second,
Everybody needing everything,
And all at once,
I'm so frustrated,
I can't even think straight,
Not having the slightest clue,
What I should do next,
All I really want to do is,
Is just sleep,
My head is spinning,
My body is shaking,
I can't eat anything,
Massive headaches are taking over my entire self,
Could it be what I thought it was,
No,
It's only a tiny fever!
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02-06-2010 01:51 PM
At first I was thinking- Hey, lots of people go though this. then I kept reading and I wondered how the title fever came into play. I reread the ending, I like it. It's funny because your charecter thinks that she or je is all depressed then they remember tyhat it is just a fever. I like it.
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02-06-2010 02:28 PM
hey thanks!
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02-07-2010 10:06 AM
Yep...No problem!