Some say time will heal a broken heart. I say hate heals it faster. So many tears pour out for her. With each drop my heart hardens. Until there is nothing left but steel. No longer will it be flesh and weak to be rip out and taken. Unbreakable it sits in my chest beating, protecting, guarding, letting no one near. Some may say this is madness, I say it's the only way to live without being heartbroken .
ohh.... is that feeling really came from yours? well.... if it is, I don't think I agree(I'm not angry or anything... not even a bit sarcastic).... and why? well... it's just that... hatred will do you no good at all... and I think I have an idea of being heart broken... and it's all right to cry.... it's all right to be hurt... but the thing that counts is how you will act after that.... will you be happy for the person? hate her(like what you said here)? or just be indifferent? I know it would be HARD and all, but you've got to let go of your anger... and most of all, you must soften your heart... maybe she's just not the right person for you... maybe there's someone else... someone that's MUCH better... MUCH more lovable... and someone LOVING you back... and I also suggest that you be happy for that person you're talking about... I hope this little stuff helped, and I hope you're not mad at me... 
* I replied immediately after I saw this because I'm a girl... and I don't wanna be hated by anyone and, who knows, maybe the girl you're talking about doesn't want it either...
*sighs* yeah... I know that it's a relief to let your feelings out... well, I've got to admit I'm doing that too.... sometimes here in the internet, but most often in my diary... ummm.... did I offended you? *slowly, tensed* I'm sorry... I didn't mean to...
and don't worry... I know exActly how you feel... 
about the poem... Memnoch, do you really write your poem like a paragraph? maybe you can write it the way a poem really is written? so that we readers can read it much better... just a suggestion...not a judgment..
@ Yellowimst: lol no you didn't offend me at all .. I like it when others read and comment on my stuff. All is good tell me how it makes you feel .. i'm all ears.
@ Moonseeker: When I write i just write i guess, never really thought to put it in poem form. But i'll thinking about it. If it will make easier for the readers i will do it ..
thanks to you both to stop by and letting me know how what you think ..
