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Inspired Correspondent
Flowering
Posts: 207
Registered: 11-15-2009

Hope ya'll like it! :)

Short Story

 

Part 1

 

 

Destiny is a strange and subtle force. We mortals believe we have some sort of grasp over reality, and to a certian degree we do. But to another, we are but actors in a divine play.

A woman sits down with one of her good friends at a table in a library. There was nothing particular about this one table, but it seemed nice, comfortable even.

"Its so cold outside," She said, her name Kaity, placing her bag on the table.

"Your always complaining about the weather," Her friend said, his name Michael.

"Yeah, but you know me, I get the chills so easily, especially around this year," Kaity said.

"What, winter?" Michael laughed. "Everyone gets cold around this year."

"I know, thats what I mean! I get cold during winter, " Kaity said, annoyed.

"Oh, okay then," Michael said calmly. "Calm down."

Kaity laughed.

"I am calm, thank you very much!" Kaity said.

"Oh, Im sure," Michael said, pretending to sound unconvinced.

Just then, the librarien came around the corner from one of the tall bookshelves, and as she stoped by the table they were accidentally dropped a large book on Kaity's foot.

"Ouch!" Kaity said.

The librariens old face became contorted with guilt.

"I am SO sorry," She said, picking the book up. But just as the Librarien bent down she looked into the face of Kaity, and she gasped, smiling widely.

"Kaity, is that you?" The librarien asked.

Kaity, who was confused, looked back into the old woman's face, but was not sure who she was.

"Yes, thats my name." Kaity said, confused. "How did you know?"

The librarien began to laugh.

"How do I know?" She said, laughing even harder now. "You dont remmember me? I was your first grade teacher, Miss Clover. I never forget the faces of my students."

Kaity's eyebrows shot up in suprise.

"MIss Clover!" Kaity said, her voice raising an octive. "Omigod! What a suprise!"

Michael, who had been silent the whole time, was looking at the two woman, who were now hugging, as if he were in a strange story right now.

"Michael, this is Miss Clover, she was the best teacher at Michael Angelo's high school!" Kaity said, smiling brightly.

"Oh, thats too much dear, I was no better than anyone else," Miss Clover said, blushing.

"Well, hello," Michael said, raising out of his seat, extending his hand, and they shook, her grip, to the suprise of Michael, was quite strong.

"NIce to meet you young man," Miss Clover said, exchanging a brilliant smile with Michael.

"Wow, what were the chances?" Kaity said.

 

End of Part 1

 

To be continued...

p.s.

That is, if your interested...

Wordsmith
YeLLoWmisT
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Registered: 10-15-2009
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Re: Hope ya'll like it! :)

I don't like it!.....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I don't like it 'cause I LOVE it!!!!! Post the rest! It had caught my attention from the very first sentence.... please post the others..... It sounded interesting.... please post the rest! :smileyvery-happy:

Hey guys, check this out:

http://www.storywrite.com/
It's cool! :smileyvery-happy:
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Flowering
Posts: 207
Registered: 11-15-2009
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Re: Hope ya'll like it! :)

Oh, thank you so much!! Your interest in it is the greatest inspiration! Just one good remark is just as good as a thousand. thank you, and I'll try to write the rest, but not until I get the little story right. :smileyhappy:

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_mOonSeeKer_
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Registered: 06-15-2009
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Re: Hope ya'll like it! :)

flowering that is awesome!!! i love it!!! yes, i agree with yellowmist, we want to read more!! :smileyhappy:

 

I've never been much good at stories (only poems), but I think yours is a winner!! pls post more. :smileyhappy:

http://whisperinglostwords.blogspot.com
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WriterOfAngels
Posts: 175
Registered: 08-09-2009
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Re: Hope ya'll like it! :)

Very well written! Post more  Flowering!

 

Write On!

WOA

Kitty will attack anything that moves,
Causing trouble, starting battles just so he can be a part of
He’s the meanest little kitty so we named him Sparta!
~ Mean Kitty Song (smpfilms, I own nothing.)
Inspired Correspondent
Flowering
Posts: 207
Registered: 11-15-2009
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Re: Hope ya'll like it! :)

Awwww, you guys are the best! THank you thank you thank you! But it might take a while to write the others cuz I really suck with enthusiasm. haha

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Paris22Liz
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Registered: 11-21-2009
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Re: Hope ya'll like it! :)

I like how the story starts out in a library - I love going to the library!

 

I like the story and think it's cute.  You have two charactors who the readers can relate to.

 

When reading about the cold winter, that's a good detail and makes the reader (me) imagine it to be winter and snowy and cold!

 

Keep up the good work!

 

Liz