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Inspired Correspondent
passi0nate_1
Posts: 343
Registered: ‎06-14-2008

Love Sounds

let me know what you think of this one...:smileywink:

 

Love Sounds

To see the world

Through heavenly eyes

Is my

Siren's call

To paradise.

 

I'd catch those

Secrets

Captured in a memory

Beautiful stranger with his life

Of mystery

 

You-

So damn sickeningly smooth!

Why can't I seem to understand

what's so wrong with loving you?

 

I seem to mainly be

in love with your groove -

The way you melt into your sound

Drumming my everpresent blues.

 

They say that

time can mend

That broken record heart

But for me

Time

Won't even know where to start.

 

You seem to be

the only dream that weakens me

as my desire

puts me up on my cloud

Of sinful daydreams

 

Your stylish flow

Demands my listening for more

and what I hear

Attracts me near

and has me planning to explore

 

The little things

that seem to captivate my mind

and the fascinating study

Of things stared at

From behind

 

I might be addicted

To my constant thoughts of thee

and my lastingly desireable

Image

Of you and me

 

You'll never get this letter

Simply 'cause of what's at stake

but there's always some potential

For heated music

We can make.

 

 

Music is the cure.
I am the addiction.
Inspired Wordsmith
twilight_fanatic_01
Posts: 1,162
Registered: ‎01-02-2009

Re: Love Sounds

Oh. My. Gosh. I really, really like your poem!!! It's so in-depth...it's really touching.:smileyvery-happy:
Inspired Wordsmith
silverwings
Posts: 285
Registered: ‎01-16-2009

Re: Love Sounds

Fascinating! :smileyhappy:
"I'm asleep, but that doesn't mean I'm awake."
Distinguished Correspondent
simple_girl
Posts: 160
Registered: ‎12-28-2008

Re: Love Sounds

I like how you insinuate music into your poem. It gives it a different perspective. Overall I did enjoy it.
"It is not what we say or feel that makes us what we are. It is what we do or fail to do."
Distinguished Wordsmith
Dreamer4ever
Posts: 411
Registered: ‎11-06-2008

Re: Love Sounds

That was great!! I loved it! It definitely had passion in it, but yet at the same time it seemed subtle and it was very smooth. Good work! :smileyhappy:
The man who does not read good books has no advantage over the man who cannot read them. --Mark Twain
Contributor
1bigvikki
Posts: 22
Registered: ‎02-28-2009
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Re: Love Sounds

wow this poem was very fresh, new romantic ; it spoke to me in ways that many other poems have never andi really did enjoy it... keep ^ with the gud work
Inspired Correspondent
passi0nate_1
Posts: 343
Registered: ‎06-14-2008
0 Kudos

Re: Love Sounds

thanks everybody for all the positive feedback!!:smileyhappy:
Music is the cure.
I am the addiction.