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Dreamer4ever
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Registered: ‎11-06-2008

No Destination

No Destination

 

 

It seems so tranquil

It is so peaceful

There's a need deep inside

To walk and just keep walking

I don't know what it is

A force

A power

A dream

It sets my feet in motion

Begging to be taken

Somewhere far away

As if in a slumber

My mind doesn't question

With the starlight guiding

My every step

I keep on moving

Keep on walking

I don't know why it happens

It's like a time to get away

From everything in life

The stress

The pain

The fear

It opens a door to calm

It says don't worry

Life goes on

I wonder where I'm going

But I have no destination

And suddenly it doesn't matter

My whole body seems to sway forward

Pushing me on

I don't know what compels me

To just start walking

To just keep walking

To never stop walking

 

 

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twilight_fanatic_01
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Re: No Destination

I love the theme to this poem. It's very to-the-point and it gives the reader a feeling of emptiness thinking about this person who is trying to find their way.

 

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simple_girl
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Re: No Destination

This is a great poem. It reminds me of how so many of us feel lost in life yet know that we need to be going somewhere somehow. It is a good representation of that unknowing feeling and anxiety.
"It is not what we say or feel that makes us what we are. It is what we do or fail to do."
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rs_pathogen_Studios
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Registered: ‎01-17-2009
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Re: No Destination

Awsome poem. Dark and empty, many more people will find this as a "glimpse of hope".