05-04-2010 04:19 PM - edited 05-04-2010 04:21 PM
My life isn't easy, getting teased and bulled
Everyone around me seemed so pleased
I tried to get away from the pain
But it seems insane
To forget all of this
To never feel like I should miss it
They steal away my soul
And leave me with a big hole
Should I just die?
I sigh at the thought
For it would leave nothing
Just a huff of air and no one would care
(I just thought of it right now. So post whatever you want. I'm open to anything =P)
05-05-2010 11:13 AM
This is a very sad poem. I really hope that it is not about you. Everyone deserves more than to be bullied. However, I do feel like it would relate to a lot of adolescents. It was written very well and caught my attention as a reader.
05-05-2010 09:03 PM
Thanks so much =) I love feedback! xD The truth is the poem is about me and I've never really written poems about myself, so I wanted to try it for once and this is what came up. =P So thank you so much again for your comments I really do appreciate them =)
05-06-2010 02:56 AM
05-06-2010 04:59 AM
Great job Lexie! I like the theme that you chose... keep writing!
Yeah... I agre w/ moonseek.... this is the 1st poem you wrote I've read....
05-08-2010 10:50 AM
I really like your poem. When i read it I could relate to the charachter.
05-09-2010 03:46 PM
Hey! This is really well done! Its very well true-sounding (or something like that) or like real. I enjoyed reading it.
05-10-2010 08:19 PM