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The Dark End (Poem)
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01-28-2010 07:38 PM
The suffering of men lies above,
Where no wildflower dare to make its domicile,
Angels sing from the shadowed crevices beneath,
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Assiduous punishment from the tongues of flames,
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01-28-2010 07:41 PM
i like it!! i luv the details and i can practically feel the emotion bursting from it ![]()
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01-28-2010 08:07 PM
I like it too. Kind of creepy the first time you read it, but going through it again, you understand what the poem is about. Very deep.
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01-30-2010 03:43 PM
............ in amazement! that is beautiful!
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02-04-2010 06:40 PM
Its seems a lil bit creepy but the way you use words makes it give you a far more deeper message, I liked it. Congratulations
Karl Theodor Jaspers