06-30-2012 07:58 PM
Casred stood as still as he could, sweat beaded his brow if he were caught the guillotine would be calling his name. He had been sloppy, the prison guard was supposed to be gone yet Casred heard him taunting the prisoners. Time was against him, though ever since he first opened his eyes it had been against him but now even more so.
Horrid thoughts ran through Casred's head as he neared the dungeon step by step. His hand started to bleed from gripping the stone wall,wincing in pain he whipped his hand on his trousers.
Now or never,casred thought trying to reason with himself without much success. Casred inched closer to peer around the dungeon wall. The guard sat on a chair which was the only thing in the room except for the three prisoners who hung from chains.
I've got to do this,gulping Casred took out bottle and then a roll after putting a few drops form the bottle on the roll, he walked into the room. He was taken back by the smell of urine and rotten food. This was the tricky part ,the morning guard could not see his face or his plan would be blown,that was the importance of him sneaking down to the dungeon. If no one saw him they good never trace him to what he was about to do.
Walking up to the guard Casred tapped on his shoulder. The guard turned around , he lacked any features on his face which made him look just like any other commoner, if Casred had the guard's appearance it would have sure helped him in this case.
"What do you want you little brat" the guard demanded.
Casred just held out the roll, talking was a negative, his voice just happened to be very rememberable and Casred could not risk being discovered.
"Ah,that look good,is it from the kitchen,say thanks will you" the guard said grabbing the roll from Casred's palm.
Casred left the room then stopped and stood against the wall.Come on this is taking to long, the sleeping medicine should have kicked in by now,Casred thought impatiently.
Hearing a thud Casred walked back into the room to see the morning guard was sound a sleep on the ground.
"Yes it worked"Casred said quietly but with mirth.
Walking over to the guard Casred rolled him over,where is are the keys,he half screamed It in his mind as he searched the man's pockets his hands shaking .Aha,he thought as he pulled the keys out of the guards left pocket.The lady who gave me the sleeping medicine said it would last half an hour if she was truthful,the words ran through Casred's mind as he stood. For the first time Casred realized that he was in the middle of a dungeon break and he was the one who planed it...
06-30-2012 09:38 PM
This was the tricky part ,the morning guard could not see his face or his plan would be blown,that was the importance of him sneaking down to the dungeon.
Great tension! I'm eager to keep reading to find out what will happen. The tension skyrocketed for me when I read this line. Such intrigue.
06-30-2012 09:43 PM
I am so glad you liked it
I was so eager to see what people would say about it
I cannot wait to write more