07-15-2010 02:02 AM
Hi, I am 15 years old. My name is Victoria. I recently began writing poems to pass the time when I moved to recently from a place where I felt I didn't fit in and still do sometimes, feel as though I don't belong. As time goes on I realize just how much I love to write poems. I like writing them so much that I decided to create a website displaying some of my poems. The ones that I believe to be my best ones are not posted on the site because I hope to publish them one day which I will work on after my Beauty and the Beast poem is officially published. I'd appreciate it if you would take time out of your day and look at my website to read some of my poems at http://xoxovikki.webs.com . Thank you for your support!!!
07-15-2010 11:19 AM
I'm glad you're finding such meaning in your writing. I hope you'll post your work here in the Writing Room and give feedback to others. This is a great community of writers.
07-16-2010 12:14 AM - edited 07-16-2010 12:16 AM
Here is one of the poems that is on my site:
I can't help but to stare,
as I melt under your glare.
Your gaze putting my nerves on edge,
rising every strand of hair.
Feeling as though my heart could stop,
yet it pulses a steady beat.
My throat throbbing with hunger,
as it always does whenever we meet.
Your hand reluctant to reach for me,
as your soul is hesitant,
yet no one person could change,
these feelings in which we neglect.
By Victoria O'Selmo 6/15/10 10:17a.m.
*I wrote this at school during study hall when I felt I had nothing better to do...LOL
07-21-2010 11:11 PM
I really like it! As you read it, your writing style kind of gives you a visual, so that you can watch the scene in your mind as you read. Keep posting!