kind of a depressing poem... :\

[books4life48]

here is another one. hope u like it! p.s. no title and not very good

                                                   Forever unborn

                                                    Always dead

                                                    My soul

                                                   wants to

                                                    break free

                                                    of this

                                                    shell of

                                                     never ending

                                                       words.

                                                     I can

                                                     feel it

                                                     pulsing within

                                                         me but..

                                                         it will

                                                        be...

                                                      Forever unborn

                                                        Always dead...

[BeeZnEEz101]

Girl, grow some confidence that was good

but im not expert on poems but I thought it was good

[books4life48]

thx!

[Flowering]

Is it about wanting to create something, to say, give birth to a certian idea, but being unable to? Hence, "always dead."

[books4life48]

no actually its about trying 2 b me but not being able 2 cuz people r trying to change me into sum1 else

[com2thedarksid…]

I LOVE IT!

[books4life48]

thx appreciate it

[Night_Angel]

I really LOVE the message behind this one. 

[books4life48]

thx!!!!!!!!!!!

[CharlieG31]

Its good the only thing I didnt like was the way your ordered it lol

[books4life48]

yah lol i no