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Author123
Posts: 17
Registered: 07-21-2009

open minded

"learn your place

try to fit in

your only a child

you can only sin"

 

fathers are charming

mothers are sweet

life is a lie

and i can only weep

 

please try to help

please try to see

the only one hurting

is me

I CAN READ
I CAN WRITE
AND I LIVE IN THE U.S.A
I'M RICH...
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books4life48
Posts: 168
Registered: 12-06-2009
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Re: open minded

I like it!

~Yes*We*Have*No*Bananas~ XD
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com2thedarksidewehavbooks
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Registered: 01-16-2010
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Re: open minded

wow really intense to me! Nice!

~ com2thdarksidewehavbooks
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CharlieG31
Posts: 257
Registered: 01-06-2010
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Re: open minded

Wow its awesome , it is a really nice poem. Congratulations

"The questions are more essential than the answers."
Karl Theodor Jaspers