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01-24-2010 07:11 AM

"learn your place

try to fit in

your only a child

you can only sin"

 

fathers are charming

mothers are sweet

life is a lie

and i can only weep

 

please try to help

please try to see

the only one hurting

is me

I CAN READ
I CAN WRITE
AND I LIVE IN THE U.S.A
I'M RICH...
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01-24-2010 01:08 PM

I like it!

~Yes*We*Have*No*Bananas~ XD
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01-30-2010 03:51 PM

wow really intense to me! Nice!

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02-04-2010 06:36 PM

Wow its awesome , it is a really nice poem. Congratulations

"The questions are more essential than the answers."
Karl Theodor Jaspers

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