weekend writing

[GS2991]

Post some of your own or leave feedback. Small poems, really short storys, no limit. I'm curious as to what is scribled on the weekends. I'll start.

[GS2991]

Ah, the sight or burning leaves, Sounds of fire, Smell of gun powder, Kick of recoil, To the open pit, Taste the game, Season of Fall, My favorite time of year.

[GS2991]

This sounds corny but tell me whatch think. - iddle Jim climbed a limb. Iddle Jim fell from a limb. Iddle Jim broke a limb. Iddle jim gotta limb ina cast. Iddle Jim climbed another limb and broke another limb. Iddle Jim never learnd.

[GS2991]

Aw dude I tell you what! I was 'untin is here deer he was a twenty pointer man I tell ya. This thing hada fifty inch spread. He hada be three underd pounds! An dude I tell ya he came right up to me and took my rife! No realy man it did! He took it an an just ran oft. Ell i dono maybe he wanted ome beer! " Really cooder? " O yeah man i tell ya ! " Yeah right sure what ever helps you sleep." But man I ell ya he was a forty pointer! Had ta be . . .

[GS2991]

A cook an a nook set off for a hook. A hook in a nook hid from a cook. Hook to fish. Fish to fri. Fri to eye. Eye of my to me belly. Hunger gone tips to the cook and the nook.

[martini72]

Sleepless Nights 

Longing to be with you, to feel your skin, to hear you breath as I watch you sleep

Longing to open my heart and soul to you 

Longing to know if you feel what I feel

Sleepless Nights because the longing pains me to my core

Pains me because you don't want and care for me as I do you

Because Sleepless Nights you would be having with me 

If you were longing for me as I do you 

[GS2991]

I feel so blue, blue as the fool that says hes cool. Bewit becool bewho. No one knows who says who.

[GS2991]

He met a girl. A girl of beauty. He ask for a dinner. A no was said. Flowers and chocolate. A no was given. Try try the man did. Held captive by his own heart. She finally said "go to town. Make every other girl never want a date with you." The man dashed to task. He made first page upon a paper. His name warped. A creep a jerk they say. He ran to her hope shining love glowing. A dinner he ask. She slamed the door. "No with a fool like you!"

[Yonina_Dove]

The smell of bodies standing close, iron sights set to try, displaying all the wares and some extra. Loud talking and awe-inspired sighs, purchases made, goods bought, traded and sold. Short ones, long ones, youth size and knives, powder and casings, holsters, straps, scopes and cleaning product....such is a day at a gun show....

[GS2991]

And don't forget the yummy treats like chocolate nuts and gator jerky. I love the Gun Show! Can't wait till the next one